Ultimate victory for the villain

[Cuckwannabe111]

I have a couple of different ideas

1) Superhero theme. Superhero and his nemesis supervillain. The hero always saves the day, spoiling the nefarious plans at the last second. One day, the villain ends up seducing the hero's wife. Either he sets out to do just that, or he happens to be in a situation in which the opportunity arises. Either way, he seduces the beautiful and, up to now, faithful wife. He tells her his true identity after shooting a potent load of cum into her fertile pussy, impregnating her with the villains offspring.

2) A husband has a work bully/rival. Good husband. Decent worker. Tenured with the company. Sweet, pretty wife. Good mother. Rival/bully is a young, arrogant guy. Always talking crudely about the wife. Flirting with her. Hubby interviews for a promotion. He is a sure thing for it. At the last possible second, rival interviews. Rival gets the promotion. Rival continues to flirt with wife, working his way into her panties. Ends up moving into her bed and kicking hubby either to a guest bedroom, to sleep in the floor, or to sleep in bed with rival between hubby and wife. Rival fucks wife every night, and hubby has to wake him with a blowjob every morning

 

[noyesmaybe]

I have a couple of different ideas

1) Superhero theme. Superhero and his nemesis supervillain. The hero always saves the day, spoiling the nefarious plans at the last second. One day, the villain ends up seducing the hero's wife. Either he sets out to do just that, or he happens to be in a situation in which the opportunity arises. Either way, he seduces the beautiful and, up to now, faithful wife. He tells her his true identity after shooting a potent load of cum into her fertile pussy, impregnating her with the villains offspring.

2) A husband has a work bully/rival. Good husband. Decent worker. Tenured with the company. Sweet, pretty wife. Good mother. Rival/bully is a young, arrogant guy. Always talking crudely about the wife. Flirting with her. Hubby interviews for a promotion. He is a sure thing for it. At the last possible second, rival interviews. Rival gets the promotion. Rival continues to flirt with wife, working his way into her panties. Ends up moving into her bed and kicking hubby either to a guest bedroom, to sleep in the floor, or to sleep in bed with rival between hubby and wife. Rival fucks wife every night, and hubby has to wake him with a blowjob every morning

Not my thing but different is good..... You should write them.

 

[Cuckwannabe111]

I would love to write it. Unfortunately, I am not much of an author. I could help someone that was willing to take on the task. Of course, they would get all of the credit

 

[ElliottEden]

My two cents?

Number two is far too close to real life and so might not be so well received.

Number one? Take Braveheart and add boobs, pussy, cum and explicit scenes. But this time the 'bad guy' doesn't end up hanged, drawn and quartered. Perhaps just sent into Dimension X - oh wait that trope is already taken... just call it The Forbidden Zone... snap. Oh well. You'll figure out a name for it. Some dark and foreboding asylum run by a lunatic doctor? That... crud.

Look just sent them all to Antarctica where they meet the REAL ANCIENT SO OLD YOU'LL K'VETCH ones. Or brush up on your Lovecraft.

AH! There you go. Send the bad guy to Providence. That'll teach him.

 

[noyesmaybe]

I would love to write it. Unfortunately, I am not much of an author. I could help someone that was willing to take on the task. Of course, they would get all of the credit

The sentence you wrote above is fine, I understood what you were trying to convey, and that's the objective of writing. If you can put a sentence together you can write a short story, just add more words. Eventually you'll be very good at writing, you just need to start, practise makes perfect. Crawl walk run fly, that's what I tell my first year students at the beginning of the semester.