Typical Lake House story with a twist?

montanaboy12

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It 's always wife falls for the rich guy or the boss at the lake house....how about one where husband realizes he hasn't been what she needs, gets to her before she cheats and ravages her?
 
It's a good idea.

Hubby's not a bad guy, he's just swamped at work. Maybe has kids with an ex that takes up a lot of time as well.
One day he goes to pick up his tablet and accidentally picks up hers. He opens up the screen and it opens on a chat window. She's chatting with a buddy/pen pal and in it, she laments about how she's not getting what she needs from her relationship and that she's considering divorce or an affair. I'd make it clear that she hasn't taken those steps yet.

The husband sits down and realizes she's right and he needs to do better. He makes some calls, makes some arrangements, and tells his wife that the company has loaned him the lake house for the weekend, but he'll likely have to call in for meetings.

The wife sighs and figures it's better than nothing so she goes. When they arrive she finds he doesn't have a phone or PC with him. That's when he tells her he's just there to be with her. Alone, no distractions or concerns.

They have a wonderful, highly sexual weekend in which he vows to put more effort in than he has been. Tears, laughter, more sex, etc.

This would fit perfectly into the romance category and would be very successful if done well.
 
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