Two new stories

[JakeMorgan]

Hi everyone. I've posted two blow-by-blow accounts of past experiences and had alot of views and some good feedback. I like to know what you all think.

The first one is at http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=91641 and the second at http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=91643

Thanks,

Jake

P.S. Its great to be read!

 

[Guest]

You, lucky bastard!

 

[brownsugar004]

Jake's Tales Episode 01

Great story, you're a lucky guy. One criticism, you use the word "and" too much it messes with the flow of the story.

 

[awiahmad]

oh man that is real luckey one...the episode one..and also gives some lessons tooooo

 

[JakeMorgan]

Thanks

Thanks for the feedback, glad you all liked the stories. Writing them helped me relive the experiences again, which was great.

Thanks again,

Jake

 

[46738]

Wow! What an awesome experience!