Two new stories need assistance

[NiteRidder]

Have two new stories and need assistance - would like to have someone go over them with me before I try to publish - pretty new to the process and I know I will have made some foolish mistakes.

any volunteers?

Any assistance will be much appreciatred.


Long as There are Stars- an erotic love story, following two lovers through their lives. As much love story as erotica. My first attempt at this type of story and hope I got it right. This one is new and not even proof read

Fire on the Mountain- a stirring tale about a young back woods lady and her love affair with a legendary moonshine whiskey maker. Nasty to the core. Again just finished and not even proof read


NiteRidder

 

[SexyChele]

I can volunteer for one. Either one is fine with me. Just email it to me at chele_d_s@hotmail.com.

 

[NiteRidder]

Thanks Chele

Thanks Chele-

Have sent you off -

"Long As There Are Stars"

apprecite it any corrections or suggestions appreciated.

incidently read a couple of your stories enjoyed them

NiteRidder

"D"


What'd think of my new boots ?

 

[Guest]

any volunteers?

Fire on the Mountain- a stirring tale about a young back woods lady and her love affair with a legendary moonshine whiskey maker. Nasty to the core. Again just finished and not even proof read

I'll look at that for you, if you like. I'm on charmbrights@hotmail.com . Please let me know what you want comments on (e.g. spelling, grammar, continuity, etc.)