Twisted school/brothel fantasy idea

[Balddudesrock]

I have this idea I've been screwing around with, looking for help and or an author to write it. Maybe several authors each doing their own take on it. It goes something like this: A man, who is richer than God,through shady practices, wants to retire, and has some regrets about his past. He knows he could never be a "nice guy" it's just not in his nature, but he wants to help some people,too. So he starts a finishing school for young women, somewhere like the Philipines, or some small Polynesian island. He gets the best teachers and tutors money and influence can buy,makes sure they will learn the "social graces" as well as academics, etc. However, he is very up front, in personal interviews with each young woman, that if she comes here, she will be expected to service his whims sexually, as well as that of the all female staff and faculty. Any thoughts?

 

[Sean Renaud]

I guess it would work and I've heard worse ideas in my time than that by a long shot.

The "hero" seems to be highly confused if he feels bad for being a a bad person and he's "richer than God" then do like the great rich people of old did. Die spending it all on anything and everything. Hospitals, libraries, museums, schools whatever the fuck he wants. In this case there is nothing stopping him from building a school for girls wherever and leaving them completely alone and going picking up some huss(ies) on the side.

So here's what I would do. I would start by stepping away from the uber rich thing and leave him just well off. The only time you need someone who is "richer than God" is when you're trying to tell a story about Bruce Wayne where it's never supposed to be questioned how he can afford all this stuff. In this case just have it where the school was either already in his family for one reason or another or he built it with the last of his fortune (or close enough anyway).

I'd take away his guilt trip too. It just runs contrary to him building his own whore house (I assume whatever he did wrong is something vaguely sexual) so you're kinda missing your own point it seems. Just have him do it because this is who he is deep down. A dirty old man with an obscene amount of money. If you want him to be a bad guy have him do it because he's bad and mistreat the girls. If you want him to be the hero of the piece have him be a genuine help to these girls. Perhaps he's secretly the leader behind some sorority. The girls once they get into college in the first place are eventually introduced to him and he pays their way through college of course for a price. Win win!