Twist on a common theme

[Ldy_Sea]

I've read several stories where a family is going on a road trip and the car is overloaded so the mom has to ride on the sons lap.

The mom and son end up having sex in the car while dad drives and talks to them without realizing whats happening.

I did find several of these stories hot.

I went looking for similar stories where a daughter was sitting on her dads lap while mom drove, and i couldn't find a single one.

I plan on trying to write one, and have an idea how to get daughter on dads lap, but I really would like to read other peoples take on this premise.

Please if the muse strikes you write one and let me know so I can read them.

 

[tw_holt]

I don't feel comfy writing a dad/daughter story. If there is dad/daughter sex in my stories, it's usually a side plot, not major, and going on or alluded to in the background.

Your idea is neat though. Dad would have to be fairly hot. Girl maybe 18 or 19, picked on, never been kissed type. Dad loves her and knows her self esteem is low. So when she's on his lap in the car, he gets erect, he's embarrassed. She's curious, maybe even aroused. His love for her and his knowledge of her lack of experience causes him to play it cool, relax, and not make things more awkward - he plays it off. She, however, plays with IT...if you know what I mean. Naughty fun ensues, yadda yadda yadda, she is VERY experienced when the long car ride is over.

They, of course, could continue the sex at home in the months that follow.

 

[Hypoxia]

IRL father-daughter sex is usually fraught with power inequities and abuse. I've tended to write FD stories with inadvertent sex. (They didn't know their relationship, or the devil made them do it, or whatever.) If/when I get back to writing, A Taste of Incest - Honey 03 will necessarily be more explicit -- I mean, at the end of Honey 02, Dad just walked in on his wife and daughter's toy party -- but it'll be a comedy.

How to comfortably write a daughter-in-dad's-lap story? I'd use a common paradigm twist, with dad as victim -- daughter Danya is pushy and dad Dave is wimpish and easily manipulated while mom Marva may be 1) unknowing, or 2) bemused, or even 3) helpful.

1) Danya contrives to sit in Dave's lap while Marva drives and chatters endlessly, oblivious to what's happening in the back seat. (Why are Dave and Danya in back? The car's full, maybe with XMas presents; the front passenger seat is filled by a huge teddy bear. Or whatever.)

2) Marva knows what's happening in the back seat and she smiles; maybe she's even excited by the scents and sounds. She sees this as her little girl growing up and taking charge of life.

3) Marva and Danya plotted this so Marva can get evidence to use against hapless Dave in the upcoming divorce. They'll leak the sex video, of course, to gain fame, wealth, whatever.​

The way I would *not* write it has Dave engineering the daughter-fucking. Too creepy for me.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

My premise is dad wife and youngest daughter are leaving oldest daughters wedding. The couple left on their honeymoon leaving the presents to be transported in Mom and dads car. No way to fit them in, and three people so daughter ends up riding on dads lap, since dad has had too much to drink at the reception he is in no condition to drive.

Its a two hour ride home, oh and did I mention its the wee hours of the morning so there's no traffic, and the daughter is wearing a [Shopping web sote link removed.]

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

I think the reason for the lack of stories where the wife is driving is probably because the guy does the lion's share of the driving on road trips. Besides Thelma & Louise, I can't really think of a road trip movie where a woman is doing the driving.

A possible premise:

Maybe the father and the daughter had a little too much to drink so the wife is doing the driving. Maybe the wedding reception they're leaving is their eldest daughter's. Maybe the wife's mother is in the front seat which forces the father & daughter in the back. The car is loaded up with stuff (gifts/other wedding crap) which forces the drunken daughter to sit on drunken dad's lap. Uncontrolled boner arises which leads to some naughty, drunken sex.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

I think the reason for the lack of stories where the wife is driving is probably because the guy does the lion's share of the driving on road trips. Besides Thelma & Louise, I can't really think of a road trip movie where a woman is doing the driving.

I agree with your statement. In reality, men do most of the driving on family trips.

Then again in reality a mom doesn't catch her son masturbating and begin a torrid love affair with him.

In reality no female has 58JJJ size breasts with no sag

In reality a woman doesn't see a hot giy next door and open her curtains wider to let him watch her masturbate

If we started letting reality guide these stories, then they won't be anywhere near as interesting.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

Well the story I wrote has been up for a week, and it seems to have struck a chord. 36 comments on it and Rating has been around a 4.6 NOt to bad.

Here is the link, https://www.literotica.com/s/sitting-on-daddys-lap

I hope others try to write one. It seems to be very popular.

 

[QuidProQuo77]

Whew...

Well the story I wrote has been up for a week, and it seems to have struck a chord. 36 comments on it and Rating has been around a 4.6 NOt to bad.

Here is the link, https://www.literotica.com/s/sitting-on-daddys-lap

I hope others try to write one. It seems to be very popular.

Very nicely done.

 

[Mello_SixtyNine]

I tend to lean towards stories that attempt to have a well thought out premise that tries to be plausible. I know that you need a certain suspension of disbelief but I've seen stories where a story only has 3 or 4 sentences that leads into crazy incestuous sex.

It just seems lazy when the writer does something like that.

 

[Ldy_Sea]

I tend to lean towards stories that attempt to have a well thought out premise that tries to be plausible. I know that you need a certain suspension of disbelief but I've seen stories where a story only has 3 or 4 sentences that leads into crazy incestuous sex.

It just seems lazy when the writer does something like that.

Wait other peoples relatives don't jump in bed as soon as they see each other naked. Damn your world is very different from mine...

 

[Everyday_Man]

I tend to lean towards stories that attempt to have a well thought out premise that tries to be plausible. I know that you need a certain suspension of disbelief but I've seen stories where a story only has 3 or 4 sentences that leads into crazy incestuous sex.

It just seems lazy when the writer does something like that.

If I'm reading an incest story, I'd prefer it as far away from plausible as possible, but each to their own.

 

[MatthewVett]

I think the reason for the lack of stories where the wife is driving is probably because the guy does the lion's share of the driving on road trips. Besides Thelma & Louise, I can't really think of a road trip movie where a woman is doing the driving.

Time to watch Mad Max: Fury Road!

 

[MatthewVett]

I agree with your statement. In reality, men do most of the driving on family trips.

Then again in reality a mom doesn't catch her son masturbating and begin a torrid love affair with him.

In reality no female has 58JJJ size breasts with no sag

In reality a woman doesn't see a hot guy next door and open her curtains wider to let him watch her masturbate

If we started letting reality guide these stories, then they won't be anywhere near as interesting.

For me, I think of erotica as conforming to the same rules as farce, like in this bit about Father Ted.

"As per Graham Linehan's over-the-top Signature Style. He's stated in interview that when everyone knows how farce comedy works and everything is running on the Rule of Funny anyway, attempting to make the scenarios at all "realistic" is just patronising and detracts from the potential humour. Hence things like the perfectly square bit of dirt, which he could have come up with a credulity-stretching Hand Wave for, but why bother? Without one, the setup for the joke is a surreal sight gag in itself."

We all know how erotica works. We know what the destination is. Why quibble over the journey? Yeah, I think it needs to follow basic rules of plausibility with regards to human behavior and physics and such, but if the story work best with some 58JJJ jugs, put 'em in!

 

[HonorableRogue]

I plan on trying to write one, and have an idea how to get daughter on dads lap, but I really would like to read other peoples take on this premise.

Please if the muse strikes you write one and let me know so I can read them.

I'm game. I'll stick with the wedding theme but change the setup.

Cheers