TV show idea

[keithb1002]

I've got about 15 story ideas that I would like to run by someone. All of my stories will include the victim being 18 and a virgin. I'll give an example. One story I've been playing with is a parody of the A&E show Beyond Scared Straight. In my story a young girl who just turned 18 moves to a new town with her baby brother and mom.

The girl gets into trouble at her new school with her failing her classes and getting into fights with other girls becauseshe is caught talking with their boyfriends and this girl has extremely huge breasts She is called into the principal's office and is asked about her classes and fights. Then the principal takes out a box of drugs. They found it in her locker. She says they were planted by other girls that don't like her. She is given a choice of either a weekend in the juvinille justice center or a day in the county's Scared Straight Program.

She is raped and abused by the sheriff, deputies, officers, and everyone in the men's, women's dorm as well as those in protective custody and also the child molester's who are housed in a seperate unit.

Let me know what you think and please contact me if you have any comments or ideas. Also, if you want to contact me privatltly, message me on Yahoo IM under the name keithb100272.

Keithb1002

 

[MyRubiLips]

I've got about 15 story ideas that I would like to run by someone. All of my stories will include the victim being 18 and a virgin. I'll give an example. One story I've been playing with is a parody of the A&E show Beyond Scared Straight. In my story a young girl who just turned 18 moves to a new town with her baby brother and mom.

The girl gets into trouble at her new school with her failing her classes and getting into fights with other girls becauseshe is caught talking with their boyfriends and this girl has extremely huge breasts She is called into the principal's office and is asked about her classes and fights. Then the principal takes out a box of drugs. They found it in her locker. She says they were planted by other girls that don't like her. She is given a choice of either a weekend in the juvinille justice center or a day in the county's Scared Straight Program.

She is raped and abused by the sheriff, deputies, officers, and everyone in the men's, women's dorm as well as those in protective custody and also the child molester's who are housed in a seperate unit.

Let me know what you think and please contact me if you have any comments or ideas. Also, if you want to contact me privatltly, message me on Yahoo IM under the name keithb100272.

Keithb1002

Eighteen year olds wouldn't go to juvie. It is for juveniles. Once someone hits the age of majority, they are entered into the adult system. Also, "child molesters" wouldn't want an eighteen year old, nor would they be "housed in a separate unit" even remotely close to juvie.

Not even sure how to address the "people in protective custody" part...

One last point I'd like to touch base on is Lit's "soft rule" regarding rape. Sure, there's a Non Consent/Reluctlance category, but the general rule of thumb is "the victim has to like it in the end". I have a sticky at the top of this board that goes into Laurel's (the site owner) thoughts on the subject.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Lets see if we can't unfuck this. Our wonderous Mod Rubi has covered most of the mechanical issues as well as the soft rape rule. I'll toss in my quick "GAH I understand why it's there but this and first time stories are such a pain in the ass with the hard 18 rule." That being said genuine pedos wouldn't be interested in any woman I would EVER write a story about rules or no. Though I guess LEGALLY someone who boned a girl who was 17 years, 11 months, 30 days, 24 hours, and 59 minutes would qualify as a child molester depending on who made the distinction. And Miley Cyrus is legal but as I've been informed she is a 10 year old boy in a skirt. She could be 40 and you'd still be a sicko if you boned her.

Moving along you'd probably get more views with a title that seems less deceptive. I'm certainly thinking something more lighthearted than this when I see "TV Show Idea" I'm assuming you probably mean a game show.

If you're sold on this idea however lets just make all the appropriate bumps. The girl is 19, she's ALWAYS been a bit of a bad girl. Good people don't just turn bad and in this case she didn't. So she was effectively railroaded by the school. That's a MAJOR issue and needs to either happen for a reason or she was bad all along. Obviously replace Juvie with County Jail or something similar.

You pretty much abandoned your idea from the get go also. You don't mention if she chooses the weekend in Juvie (Jail) or the day in Scared STraight were simply left to assume. The thing about Scared STraight is that it's primary purpose is just that. To scare the person straight under controlled circumstances where ultimately they are in no real danger.

So. . .gah untangling this web is harder than I had anticipated.

So you skip that throw her in jail. . .

Okay honestly the quick path here if you want a good girl which I suspect you do is to have a VERY corrupt society. The kind where some guy saw Big Tits, wanted her, got shut down called up his brother the Mayor and got her thrown into prison. In this society prison is funded as a television show that is one part entertainment and one part Scared Straight. Essentially the population is terrified into behaving because you are required to watch Scared Straight. (A la' 1948 with the minute of rage) If you're feeling Hunger Games-y you can even throw in some combination of audience interaction and a prize if the person manages to complete some fairly absurd objective that is there but technically impossible. (Like say Jason Statham's Death Race where nobody ever wins X races. If you get close they rig the event to fuck you. If by some act of God you manage to get past that they hold a huge ceremony, shake your hand on camera and them OMG HOW DID YOU GET HIT BY A STRAY CAR ON YOUR FIRST DAY?! Or alternatively like in 1984 they just let you sit out there and rot as an example of what happens when someone fucks with them. Either way the House always wins.)

That way the innocent girl remains intact, you can have some thinly veiled social message about how the government police state is growing too large and have some TnA along the way.

Also, dear fucking god we need a sticky for this someday.

PRIVATE MESSAGES AND OTHER FORMS OF COMMUNICATION THAT ARE NOT LOCATED ON THE FORUM ARE A BAD IDEA FOR STORY IDEAS AND SHOULD BE LIMITED TO SHARING PERSONAL INFORMATION. EVEN THEN YOU ARE BETTER OFF SIMPLY CHANGING THE DETAILS ON THE FORUM. THE REASON IS SIMPLE YOU GET MORE FEED BACK THIS WAY. EVERYTIME SOMEONE RESPONDS HERE IT BUMPS YOU UP SO MORE PEOPLE READ IT. YOU ALSO GET MULTIPLE PEOPLE HELPING YOUR IDEA GROW. WITH PMS EVEN IF YOU GET MULTIPLE PEOPLE INVOLVED THEY ARE ALL WORKING SEPARATELY AND LIKELY RETREADING THE SAME TERRITORY INSTEAD OF BUILDING ON ONE ANOTHER.

And my esteemed colleage Lovecraft will be along shortly to banish you to a dark dimension. I cannot save you but I can tell you to throw dog treats at Cthlulhu. It probably won't save you. . .but I'll find it hilarious.

 

[Strangebuddy]

And now it's time for me to do mything and ignore most of what the OP wanted.

My version: Girl does a minor infraction (jaywalking, littering, etc.) and is observed by the chief of police who decides to take advantage of her naivete and good nature and reads her the riot act, talking about how she just flushed her life away. The girl is panicked and begs him not to take her to jail. He agrees but tells her she'll need to do community service with him supervising this weekend...and she can't tell anyone or he'll get in trouble for letting her off the hook.

That weekend, she shows up at a meeting room where all of the town's male officers are waiting. Nervous, the girl asks what she is supposed to do.

"Well darling, there's a plague sweeping this nation, making it hard for people to feel safe at work. We need to save these men from the greatest evil of all. We need to educate them and keep them from compounding this problem." Chief Malcom replied, raising his hand skyward like a pastor behind his pulpit.

Cindy gasped, her eyes widening as she realized the severity of duty, "How can we do that?"

"Cindy," the chief said, bclapping his raised hand down on the young girl's shoulder, "We're going to teach them about sexual harassment, so young women like yourself will never be hurt by it. We're going to show them how easy it is to give into depravity, to treat a woman like a piece of meat. By the time we're done, you will have helped playing a big part in how this town, no, this entire country, treats women."

Cindy beamed and almost started to weep with joy. She had come to this training hall as a jaywalker, the lowest of the low, and now Chief Malcom was going to let her help him in his divine work. She felt like an apostle, staring into the face of god.


...this of course leads to them taking advantage of her so the "evils of sexual harassment" can be fully demonstrated, with each officer needing to go through the "coursework." While Cindy is embarrassed, she goes through it all, thinking of how many people will be saved from sexual harassment.

The chief lets her go afterwards but is shocked when he discovers that someone stole the SD card out of his camera. He hunts down all the officers who swear they didn't touch it and are pissed he recorded it at all.

A week later, the chief is ragged when he gets a call from a jubilant Cindy.

"Chief Malcom, I have wonderful news!" Cindy exclaimed, "I think I've really helped spread our message."

Malcom took a sip from his flask, he was in no mood for this, "Cindy, what are you talking about? The message got spread, you did a good job. I've got some new problems to worry about."

"Oh...I'm sorry." Cindy said, her tone not dissimilar from a puppy dog's whine, "I just thought you would be happy that I've been sending copies of of our demonstration out and it seems like it's getting a big response."

"Well, that's great honey that's...what?" The flask dropped onto his keyboard, dumping its foul contents over the keys.

"I said I sent it out," she explained, "I thought it wasn't fair that the policewomen didn't get to go, so I made a copy for them...and then I made one for the Sheriff's office so they would know what a good job you're doing...the sheriff even had me send a copy to the FBI. Isn't it great? We're going to save so many people!"

"YOU STUPID BITCH!" Malcom screamed, "I WISH YOU'D CHOKED TO DEATH ON MY COCK WHEN I WAS FUCKING YOUR WHORE MOUTH!"

"I-I'm sorry Chief," Cindy said, sniffling, "I thought you'd be happy, I-oh, the FBI agents say they have what they need. I hope they edit out your swearing on the recording they made."

 

[Sean Renaud]

PSSST. Lit's story minimum is 750 words. That's 536 words. You think you can maybe manage 214 words between the part you cut off at the beginning and you know ALL THE SEX in the middle? Seriously so tempted to C&P your hard work and fill in the blanks like Madlibs. But that would wrong and make me a bad person.

 

[Strangebuddy]

I guess I an give it a shot, though I'm cool if you just want to run with it. That or my other spin where an abstinence only teacher tries to take advantage of a girl by showing her all the sinful things she can do that are only okay if she is married. However, her BFF tags along and the horny teacher decides to let them experiment with each other, right before having his own fun, he gets called away.

When he returns, the girls have left. The following Monday he asks what happened and they show off their marriage certificate. They enjoyed sex so much that they went and got hitched. The teacher then comes under fire from the ultra-conservative town for supporting marriage equality and he tries to defend himself by revealing he wasn't trying to support the LGBT community, he just wanted to take advantage of two students who trusted him.

The town carries out small-town justice and does a lot of soul-searching while the newly-weds lick and fondle happily, knowing that all of their lustful desires are now completely sin-free.