eroscalling4U
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I have this story idea and would like some feeback on it.
The basic plot is this:
Steve is a "cockster". He frequents a local bar, and basically turns the bar into his own little "harem", because he has fucked all the regular women-repeatedly.
He will date (and sleep with) one, then after a short time, gets hungry for something different, so goes after another. Most women, after seeing what he's doing, would not screw him ever again, but the problem is-he is EXCEPTIONAL with sex-this paticular trio of women just can't seem to turn Steve down; they hate the fact that he's so good -and knows it, but their bodies CAN'T deny him-until:these three women who happen to be nurses at the local hospital, (and they know a few "tricks" themselves) join together to make Steve pay. They tie him down and, for the entire weekend they make him THEIR fuck toy. They focus on his ass because they know that he's very anally sensitive, but also "homophobic" about his asshole being touched or messed with. So they use his "weakness" to make him cum again, and again to make him "submit" to them-thereby turning things completely around. Although this story is very anally intensive, they also shave his pubic area, among other things.
So, What do you think? Will it "fly"???
Thanks for your feedback
Eros
The basic plot is this:
Steve is a "cockster". He frequents a local bar, and basically turns the bar into his own little "harem", because he has fucked all the regular women-repeatedly.
He will date (and sleep with) one, then after a short time, gets hungry for something different, so goes after another. Most women, after seeing what he's doing, would not screw him ever again, but the problem is-he is EXCEPTIONAL with sex-this paticular trio of women just can't seem to turn Steve down; they hate the fact that he's so good -and knows it, but their bodies CAN'T deny him-until:these three women who happen to be nurses at the local hospital, (and they know a few "tricks" themselves) join together to make Steve pay. They tie him down and, for the entire weekend they make him THEIR fuck toy. They focus on his ass because they know that he's very anally sensitive, but also "homophobic" about his asshole being touched or messed with. So they use his "weakness" to make him cum again, and again to make him "submit" to them-thereby turning things completely around. Although this story is very anally intensive, they also shave his pubic area, among other things.
So, What do you think? Will it "fly"???
Thanks for your feedback
Eros
