Turning the tables on the Queen Bee/Bitch years later

[PerilEyes]

Girl finds out the prom queen was sleeping with her boyfriend, even catching them at the year end event no less. "She'll get over it..." the Bitch says after the crying girl rushes out of the washroom.

Fast forward seven years later and they reconnect by chance. Bitch apologizes for everything that happened and that she's not that person anymore. She's got a decent job and a man. Girl also is doing well for herself, but hasn't gotten over what happened years ago. She repays the deed.

 

[Hypoxia]

"She repays the deed." How? Some possibilities:

* Standard vengeance fuck -- Girl seduces Bitch's Man
* BTB revenge -- Girl arranges Bitch's destruction (legal, commercial, relational, etc)
* Easy twist -- Girl plots on revenge for years, but finds Bitch is already destroyed by slutdom / drugs / whatever
* Group twist -- Girl obsesses for years, but when she encounters Bitch and Man, they seduce her
* SciFi twist -- Girl obsesses, builds time machine, travels back to prevent Bitch from screwing Boyfriend -- but Girl finds that she has BECOME Bitch, and LIKES being her -- or, Girl is trapped in a paradox time-warp, and can only view Bitch screw Boyfriend over and over...

 

[BurningMonkey]

Hypoxia, sometimes there's a dark, bitter edge to your plotlines...

 

[Hypoxia]

Hypoxia, sometimes there's a dark, bitter edge to your plotlines...

Cynical, sardonic, absurdist, experienced -- guilty as charged, or nolo contendre at least. I blame comix.

 

[TheTalkMan]

if this were one of my stories, history would repeat itself and the prom queen would fuck the girl's man again. I've had a similar story idea in that vein for awhile now, but I don't if that's what you're going for.

 

[Hypoxia]

if this were one of my stories, history would repeat itself and the prom queen would fuck the girl's man again.

Damn, I forgot that one!

Take a step beyond: Bitch fucks Girl's current guy, AND her brother (and maybe her sister too). Then Bitch's Man fucks Girl's sister and maybe Girl too. Now, Bitch and her Man have a stable of sex slaves: Girl, her guy, her siblings, maybe some others in her circle. Hilarity ensues.

 

[PerilEyes]

if this were one of my stories, history would repeat itself and the prom queen would fuck the girl's man again. I've had a similar story idea in that vein for awhile now, but I don't if that's what you're going for.

Wow, TheTalkMan makes a rare forum appearance! Nice to see you chime in!

Actually, yeah, I was considering that as a twist, lol. Girl goes in with the intention of besting this 'changed' woman, only to find she's been had - again.

Hypoxia, you really have a knack for the dark storylines....I like it!

 

[Hypoxia]

Hypoxia, you really have a knack for the dark storylines....I like it!

Bright storylines become boring after awhile. Life bites, more than it nibbles. Besides, what's a story without surprise, conflict, twists, anxiety, confusion, missteps? Pratfalls are fun too. And cartoonish squawking peoples running around in headless-chicken mode.

Think of every storyline as a WHAT-IF. WHAT IF your characters possess certain attributes? (villainy, innocence, competence, sloppiness) WHAT IF character-x is bound to prevail? How do they get there? WHAT IF you, the author, decide to make the story a stroker, or tragedy, or comedy, or farce, or mystery, or moral polemic, or some combination thereof? WHAT IF you decide the story is plot-driven, or character-driven, or a sexual-activity report? Just build a mental decision-table matrix of possibilities, and play them out.