Turning the cliche cuckold story on its head.

[Randomcarrot]

I don't have a lot of confidence pulling this story off as I'm just beginning to write stories here.
The general Idea is a couple where the husband is well endowed goes out to find the typical alpha bull type that likes to humiliate and taunt the husband during sex.
The twist would be as this bull gets into it and starts taunting the wife interrupts him and says "This isn't working out, I need a real cock. Hubby come here and fuck me properly" or something like that. Or the husband could interrupt by saying something as well, though I don't really have an idea for his line.



It could be told from the bulls point of view to invite the reader into the process from going to a confident guy to suddenly experiencing sexual humiliation and the emotional backlash that could have.

It could be told from the wife's point of view to put emphasis on the seduction process and vetting of the right guy. Then the thoughts that would be going through her head during the sex till this guy finally says the wrong thing so her husband could spring into action to start the real fun.

And lastly it could be told from the husbands point of view, a guy that gets an ego boost off taking down arrogant bulls a notch. Could take you through the process of finding a hotel or motel that suited it, and maybe the outfit the wife would wear. The anticipation of seeing his wife getting the other guys engine going knowing in a little bit he'll be pounding the shit out of while the bull just stands there dumbfounded.


Maybe its a crazy idea, it would probably need some experience in writing the 'wife gets taken by bull and humiliate husband' stories in order to do a complete 180 if you go from the bulls point of view.

 

[sirhugs]

Hubby's line would be "No, you're doing it all wrong", after the Bull had sawed away for 20 minutes without even arousing the wife.

 

[Randomcarrot]

Hubby's line would be "No, you're doing it all wrong", after the Bull had sawed away for 20 minutes without even arousing the wife.

Yeah that works perfectly. Good call

 

[Hypoxia]

Oh, so this is willing-cuck (wimp) fetish fiction, not actual unwilling cuckholdry, right? Hey, do whatever you want with the fetish action, it's just a story, not real cuckism.

But yeah, it's an interesting twist, where the husband-and-wife team PLOT to humiliate bulls. Their modus operandi -- pick up a bull and break him, destroy his faith in his studliness, reduce him from arrogance to trepidation, shatter his self-esteem. The couple thus provide a public service that may save some marriages.

 

[Randomcarrot]

Yeah my idea was that it would start being like the typical short cuckold story, but then midway through it would do a complete 180 hopefully to a great surprise to the reader (and perhaps piss some off)

Later chapters if someone writes it, it could then show them doing the planning and how it boosts their sex life, or the plans getting more and more elaborate.

 

[sirhugs]

might be interesting if they find wife a guy with a smaller cock than huge hubby, because she is tired of being stretched so wide. In return, wife surprises hubby with a young gal, because she thinks he deserves a pussy that is still tight...

not sure where it goes after that though.

 

[kzchopper]

Mount the bull

maybe after the bull has cum, hubby mounts the bull who's too tired to protest much as wife cheers him on. Maybe throws in a little torment to. " yes baby give it to him deep, don't stop till HE finishes cleaning his mess. she gasped"

 

[TornadoTys]

Another twist on the story could be that the bull has been set up by the husband and wife. Because the Bull had a hand in destroying a marriage which were good friends of the hero huge husband.
The Bull had humiliated a husband so bad the wife losted all respect for him and the marriage slowly died !

 

[jeninflorida]

might be interesting if they find wife a guy with a smaller cock than huge hubby, because she is tired of being stretched so wide. In return, wife surprises hubby with a young gal, because she thinks he deserves a pussy that is still tight...

not sure where it goes after that though.

Well, a smaller man could be key! meaning, what if she wanted to try DP but there is no way she's taking hubby there due to his girth