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[Ricky_Spanks]

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[yukonnights]

Ricky, I can only assume that the content you put in the text box of your first post above is your story. If that is correct, I have to tell you that what you wrote above is not what most readers and probably all authors would consider a story. You, like all of us, conjure up these ideas about something we consider sexy. I'm not trying to dissuade you from dong that or writing — but I think you should spend some time reading stories here or elsewhere and take note of the way they are crafted. If you're hoping to publish here on Literotica, I can pretty much assure you that stuff like you wrote above will not be accepted by the Literotica editors / owners. Don't give up — just try to improve on the presentation of your ideas. Hope this helps and Best Wishes!