Trying to write my first BDSM story...

[TheCaptain]

Heya all!

I'm looking to write a BDSM story for a lit-er over in the Ametuer Pics section, who's supposedly gonna pose for a pic if I make her hot and cum

A worthy enough reason to make a lit tale, if ever I heard one...

Was wondering, if any regular or semi-regular BDSM authors/readers/practicers could give me a few pointers as to what they enjoy doing in such a scenario, or reading about in their stories.

Again, this is my first foray into this form of sexuality - it SORT OF gets me interested, the whole DOM/sub aspect and the forcefulness, but I'm more of a pervy incest fantasizer, call me demented I know I am - so I really have little idea whats hot and whats not.

I'm plannin on reading up on some of the more succesful post in this genre, but would also love feedback here... Bedtime, darlin, looikin at u for help with a big leery on this ugly 'young' mug!

Okay, SOS typed, now to wait for the replies...

Capt

Oh yes, if anyone's interested in what I'm going on about, here is a link to the sexy babe in question's pix thread, and here is a link to the competition that I'm looking at doing this story for.

Cya

 

[flawed_ethics]

Interesting contest. Even more interesting pics!

Do you know what you want to write about? Wearing a blindfold is a restrain, but you may not get far telling that to the guy with the gag in his mouth bound to a cross after a 'cute' series of lashes.

I guess it depends on how comfortable you are in alternative avenues.

When you have an idea, I would try pitching your idea to the folks in the BDSM forum. I don't know if they like story soliciters there, but they'd be more knowledgeable in the subject.

My two cents: I'm a softie. I like the safe innocent play. Reading about people dabbling into the darker erotic arts. Restrained to the bed, blindfolds, wax, palyful whipping, Master/sub in the bedroom. That kinda stuff. Ball gags, breast torture, and whenever the Dominator comes off as a disingenuous creep are instant back-clicks.

 

[BedtimeStories]

If ya need any help, kid, contact me.

 

[snooper]

I have published 15 novels in the BDSM genre, but all of them concentrate on the mental aspects. There is some description of the hardware used, and some scenes of physical violence, but the D/S element is the main thing.

I tried talking to the BDSM board people, but you would not believe the abuse I got for actually shock horror selling stories about their way of life.

Studying some of what was posted on there, I came to the conclusion that most of them only talked about BDSM and very few of them had gone beyond the wishful thinking stage.

The Internet is a wonderful source of information on the topic. Google has found me devices and practices which I could never have thought up in a month of Sundays.

 

[Brinnie]

Great idea, but yea... Google knows all ​

 

[sirhugs]

the BDSM Talk Forum is also newbie friendly.

 

[BedtimeStories]

Are they now? I got the vibe over there that the "regulars" were mostly snobs and "net doms" (lowercase on purpose) only.

Maybe my few peeks and visits were just "off" days...

 

[sirhugs]

Are they now? I got the vibe over there that the "regulars" were mostly snobs and "net doms" (lowercase on purpose) only.

Maybe my few peeks and visits were just "off" days...

I found several folks willing to help bring realism to my dabbling in bdsm (lite) stories. Maybe they aren't there anymore. I haven't visited in a while.

 

[BedtimeStories]

Neither have I, so I do not know. But I'll still call You "Sir"...(or "Daddy", Your choice!)...

 

[sirhugs]

Neither have I, so I do not know. But I'll still call You "Sir"...(or "Daddy", Your choice!)...

yum. How about " Daddy, Sir"....

 

[TheCaptain]

I'll have to take a little peek into the BDSM Talk forum, might even resubmit the top post of this thread over there and see what bites, but I'll only be able to make sporatic visits here now and then, cause the laptop's in the shop I'm afraid, and I don't even know now if I'll have the time to get round to this story til maybe the middle of next year!

Woe is me... I had a really fuckin crappy week, it really does suck ballz to be livin my life, in a bad way.

Capt

 

[sirhugs]

I'll have to take a little peek into the BDSM Talk forum, might even resubmit the top post of this thread over there and see what bites, but I'll only be able to make sporatic visits here now and then, cause the laptop's in the shop I'm afraid, and I don't even know now if I'll have the time to get round to this story til maybe the middle of next year!

Woe is me... I had a really fuckin crappy week, it really does suck ballz to be livin my life, in a bad way.

Capt

just remember : any day you get out of bed is a good day

 

[Saucyminx]

I found several folks willing to help bring realism to my dabbling in bdsm (lite) stories. Maybe they aren't there anymore. I haven't visited in a while.

Everyone has been really nice to me over yonder too. Maybe they just felt sorry about my "bad" tattoo.

Well, Capt, she's definately story worthy. What a rack. Yum.

 

[sirhugs]

Everyone has been really nice to me over yonder too. Maybe they just felt sorry about my "bad" tattoo.

Well, Capt, she's definately story worthy. What a rack. Yum.

I agree, Cap

and when do we see that tattoo, Saucy?

 

[sirhugs]

If ya need any help, kid, contact me.

now there's a story idea!

innocent young writer contacts older Mistress for story research.....

 

[Saucyminx]

I agree, Cap

and when do we see that tattoo, Saucy?

Uh, which one?

 

[TheCaptain]

now there's a story idea!

innocent young writer contacts older Mistress for story research.....

That's a pretty good one, actually... sort of Secret Window-esque, in a warped, nicely perverted BDSM way

Will have to see if I can take this a little further, maybe... will endeavour to let y'all know how it goes .

Capt

 

[TheCaptain]

Uh, which one?

lol The more, the merrier!!!

Ahhh, I'm soooo hopeless at this crap. Everything I type up sounds cheesy and pathetic, and I can't get a good scenario started up in my own mindset that fits this saucy lil broad...

Shit. Do I make this story up as a one-off for their competition only, or try to make it good enough to also submit to Lit? Damn, it's so hard to work on pen and paper now, since the computer's on the frizz... Goddamnit

Meh no idea what I'm doin here, ideas/suggestions are not really comin my way... any help at all would be greatly appreciated, I'm real stuck here!

Capt

 

[TheCaptain]

Oh yeah, posted a 'please help' kind of thread on the BDSM Talk forum over there, but got little viewership and no replies... stonewallin the newbie, maybe, who knows? But have been lurking over there a little bit, and got a bit more info than I had goin into this whole project .

Capt

 

[TheCaptain]

I just read this, over on the pix thread page lilevilpunk has, from her 'Master', MasterSnatch... shit

So everyone knows the contest will be done by the end of the month with a winner selected on the first so if you are planning to try and get a personal pic of lilevilpunk just for you in a pose of your choice it's best to come up with an idea to make her wet or cum quick.

Not good, especially with the fact that I'm currently minus a personal computer. Not even sure if I'll bother now... the timeframe might not even be reachable, with my current predicament. Hmmm. Worth mulling over.

Capt

 

[TheCaptain]

lol this'll be the fifth post in about twenty minutes here!!!

Umph, I don't think I'll bother with this competition, or basing a BDSM tale on this chick... but one day I WILL have to get around to typing up a story along this genre.

Bed, will have to have a chat with you sometime about this... gettin the impression that whips, chains, leather etc are constant props in the bedroom round your neck of the woods!

Capt

 

[BedtimeStories]

yum. How about " Daddy, Sir"....

Yes Daddy, Sir.

 

[BedtimeStories]

Bed, will have to have a chat with you sometime about this... gettin the impression that whips, chains, leather etc are constant props in the bedroom round your neck of the woods!

Capt

Now that I left the ex, and have a sex life, they are.

 

[sirhugs]

Yes Daddy, Sir.

nice to see you back, little girl, but don't talk with your mouth full

"Don't talk With Your Mouth Full"....story title looking for a plot?

 

[TheCaptain]

Now that I left the ex, and have a sex life, they are.

Foolish nit... how dare he not thoroughly satisfy such a decadent lil minx!!!

Idiots like that don't know what they have til it's gone, anywayz - better off without the excess baggage, Bed!

Capt