Trying to name a character

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Right now his name is David, which works, but the problem is that my main character (to whom he is the love interest) is Danielle, and I can see that getting confusing or annoying.

He's tall, gangly, straw-colored hair, green eyes, glasses. Undeveloped physique--sort of a nerd, but without the acne problems. He cleans up well. He's one of those "nice guys" you hear about, the ones a girl isn't afraid to bring home to her mother; clean-cut, polite, intelligent, doesn't mouth off in public. Socially he keeps to himself, biding his time and not saying much until he can drop the perfect comment that turns everything on his ear; his favorite quote is Archimedes: "Give me a place to stand and with a lever I will move the whole world." He's not big on confrontations--especially the surprise ones he hasn't had time to prepare himself for. Not clumsy, but not much of a sportsman either; he likes to win, but he doesn't find much reward in making others lose. Not particularly adventurous; likes his comfort zones. And, relatedly, not particularly ambitious either, which women have had their concerns about.

I am especially looking for a name that has plenty of nicknames or diminuitives. This is because I'm using alternate names to describe the characters' different phases of life or facets of personality. Danielle, for instance, is "Dani" to her friends, "Nellie" to her parents, "Elle" when she's trying to be suave and sophisticated, and "D" when someone's snubbing her. (I had a thread about her earlier.) This may extend to changing which name the story refers to them by, which could get confusing but which I want to try handling (to see if I'm good enough). But to do that, I need a variety of nicknames. And right now I haven't got one.

...Help?
 
One male name I really like to use especially for young guys is Jim. It seems to do something to me when the girls calling, "Come on Jimmy boy drive me, hard!" Or you get Jimbo I just like the sound of it. Good luck C.W.
 
Wilfred - will, willy, fred, freddy ?

I should say, having names with the same initials is confusing :D
 
Richard -- Rich, Richie, Dick, Rick, Rickie -- and you could use initials from his first and middle name, for example -- Richard John -- RJ
 
He reminds me of my best friend, Bob, Robert, Bobby, Roberto, etc.
 
Right now his name is David, which works, but the problem is that my main character (to whom he is the love interest) is Danielle, and I can see that getting confusing or annoying.

He's tall, gangly, straw-colored hair, green eyes, glasses. Undeveloped physique--sort of a nerd, but without the acne problems. He cleans up well. He's one of those "nice guys" you hear about, the ones a girl isn't afraid to bring home to her mother; clean-cut, polite, intelligent, doesn't mouth off in public. Socially he keeps to himself, biding his time and not saying much until he can drop the perfect comment that turns everything on his ear; his favorite quote is Archimedes: "Give me a place to stand and with a lever I will move the whole world." He's not big on confrontations--especially the surprise ones he hasn't had time to prepare himself for. Not clumsy, but not much of a sportsman either; he likes to win, but he doesn't find much reward in making others lose. Not particularly adventurous; likes his comfort zones. And, relatedly, not particularly ambitious either, which women have had their concerns about.

I am especially looking for a name that has plenty of nicknames or diminuitives. This is because I'm using alternate names to describe the characters' different phases of life or facets of personality. Danielle, for instance, is "Dani" to her friends, "Nellie" to her parents, "Elle" when she's trying to be suave and sophisticated, and "D" when someone's snubbing her. (I had a thread about her earlier.) This may extend to changing which name the story refers to them by, which could get confusing but which I want to try handling (to see if I'm good enough). But to do that, I need a variety of nicknames. And right now I haven't got one.

...Help?

I think he sounds like a Paxton. Or he could be Benedict. There are some other choices on this thread: http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=643265&page=2
 
The important thing is not to call him Quentin on page one, and then call him David on page three. Obviously if you call him Quentin on page one, he should be David on page four, and something like Sanjay on page three. That's called in the writing arena "character development"
 
The important thing is not to call him Quentin on page one, and then call him David on page three. Obviously if you call him Quentin on page one, he should be David on page four, and something like Sanjay on page three. That's called in the writing arena "character development"

I thought "character development" was when your character went in for plastic surgery. Or started taking those "Extenze" supplements. Crap.

As for the character's name, he sounds like a Wendell. Dell to his friends, Wendy to his tormenters, WD to his family.
 
Right now his name is David, which works, but the problem is that my main character (to whom he is the love interest) is Danielle, and I can see that getting confusing or annoying.

It won't help with the nicknames, but I immediately thought the obvious pairing for a Danielle was Loinel so that Danielle could be thrown into the Lionel's den. :p

Since Lionel doesn't have a lot of convenient traditional diminutives, it does free up a lot of "unassociated" nicknames like Speedy, Hoss, etc. Or depending on his full name, he might go by his initials or some derivative of his initials.
 
Albert - Al, Albie, Albertoburger, Albiedarned, AlbiehomeforChristmas...
 
The important thing is not to call him Quentin on page one, and then call him David on page three. Obviously if you call him Quentin on page one, he should be David on page four, and something like Sanjay on page three. That's called in the writing arena "character development"


I've got character development down pat then :D And readers like to keep reminding me about it too. Only I changed the characters names between chapters and not pages, just to add extra development.
 
Lance
Kevin
Allen
Justin
Devon

Wait, didn't I just name half The Backstreet Boys without realizing it???:eek:
 
Lance
Kevin
Allen
Justin
Devon

Wait, didn't I just name half The Backstreet Boys without realizing it???:eek:

Ooo, Howie! :D

Also, Margaret Cho = yay. :)

Well, on a broader level, thank you everyone who's replied so far. The whole point was that my usual process for naming characters wasn't working, so, having any suggestions is great. :)
 
Ooo, Howie! :D

Also, Margaret Cho = yay. :)

Well, on a broader level, thank you everyone who's replied so far. The whole point was that my usual process for naming characters wasn't working, so, having any suggestions is great. :)
Howie would be awesome! :D
 
It won't help with the nicknames, but I immediately thought the obvious pairing for a Danielle was Loinel so that Danielle could be thrown into the Lionel's den. :p

Since Lionel doesn't have a lot of convenient traditional diminutives, it does free up a lot of "unassociated" nicknames like Speedy, Hoss, etc. Or depending on his full name, he might go by his initials or some derivative of his initials.

Leo?

Lionel Edward Oliphant?
 
How about "the Dude." You know, that or, uh, His Dudeness, or Duder, or El Duderino if you're not into the whole brevity thing.

In all seriousness, if you haven't already, go read the first paragraph of "Lolita" for a brilliant treatise on your very concept.......Carney
 
How about "the Dude." You know, that or, uh, His Dudeness, or Duder, or El Duderino if you're not into the whole brevity thing.

In all seriousness, if you haven't already, go read the first paragraph of "Lolita" for a brilliant treatise on your very concept.......Carney


To illustrate your point...

She was Lo, plain Lo, in the morning, standing four feet ten in one sock. She was Lola in slacks. She was Dolly at school. She was Dolores on the dotted line. But in my arms she was always Lolita.
 
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