Truth is Stranger Than Fiction

[DarkPleasures]

or Law & Order Typically Claims Their Tales are Based on Truth

Is this "idea" too risque for Lit? Angles could be worked that the family is brainwashed and/or consents for God knows what reason... They had an episode where the patriarch wanted a large family, but he could no longer produce children. (They did not go into details.) He had other men fuck his wife. One character said "he likes to watch" when Stabler asked why the husband would pay him to bang his wife. As the episode unfolds, it is learned that the wife could no longer bare children. She had had a hysterectomy. Now, the daughter enters the picture. 18, or older for Lit, of course. In the episode, these other men still banged the wife and the husband would then collect the sperm and inseminate the daughter with a syringe. For a story here, it could be worked that these other men fucked the daughter directly.

Thoughts?

 

[LupusDei]

I see nothing too outrageous at all.

For the first part, no problem at all, if you look around the forum here it's full of hotwife couples, cuckolds, sissies, and not not to be forgotten, swingers and polyamory groupings all of which would be delightful to watch their wife fucked by a stranger in right circumstances, although outright paying for it might require something little extra, but principally even that's not a problem.

Now, involving the daughter, that's a little kinky. Breeding is a fetish in its own right, but using a syringe for sperm transfer... actually why the fuck not, it just needs to be written as a real kinky daddy/daughter incest act, and D/d is little losing popularity to the absolute superstar of mom/son sex just because that little too real creepy factor so people are just a bit shy to admit how incredibly turned on they are by it. Because, yeah, in the strict patriarchy, man of the house owns the daughter as a commodity. Fucking her himself is a bit of wasteful, damaging goods, but if the situation calls for it there's nothing that could stop him.

Paying a man to fuck the daughter... what's the dowry is for, isn't it? Nothing abnormal at all, only the little fact the fuck doesn't have to keep her, but that's a small adjustment.

 

[DarkPleasures]

I see nothing too outrageous at all.

That's good. On the TV episode, they hinted that the daughter was raped. She did not consent. (Which I know Lit's NonCon category is a gray area and victims "have to like it by the end", yada yada.) The detectives were attempting to prosecute the owner(s) of the sperm and both men swore up and down that they never touched the daughter, and the story unfolded that "kinky husband liked to watch them fuck the wife". The daughter blocked out who bound her to the bed but she did state that the "he" used a syringe, called her a good girl, etc. I, personally, was not looking to write something towards the rape angle and figured I would write it in some brainwashed family scenario.

You've given some good insight, but I wouldn't work the tale as a direct incest thing. The dad uses other sperm to lower the chances for birth defects on the offspring. I see him as a "the larger my family is the greater I shall please God" like in the series Big Love. (On a different note, mommy/son really grosses me out. )

 

[sirhugs]

Certainly has the potential for a hot story. Lots of possible angles. Like a gang bang on daughter's 18th birthday. Or what happens due to wife's jealousy? Or does wife start or not wanting to watch but eventual feels compelled? Or does wife start out wanting to help daughter enjoy her first time?

If done right, does not have to be non-consensual. Maybe daughter has heard Mom being serviced and is looking forward to it...