true blue series by stiffness

[grey brother]

This is one of the few stories I've seen on literotica which stands up as good writing. It happens to be in 'interracial', but for my money it could be in an anthology of best erotic writing. The key here is the author's careful use of detailed repetition - the woman's eyes, in particular - and suspense, interspersed with exactly the right balance of distraction vs focus -- in this case, telephone vs cock -- and the patience with which both the author and his (her?) characters allow the story to unfold. I'd like to
hear from others if there are any other stories with such higher-quality writing techniques and style in evidence. ( The same author's other series is much more awkwardly written, I think.)