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DeeZire
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SVENI, THE VIKING ROCK STAR (3k words, Satire)
This is sort of a life-imitates-art situation. I need negative comments, appearing to be coming from Sveni, the Viking Rock Star’s fans. This would give my story an air of authenticity, and give you an excuse to vent. (The story is not particularly well-written, so it should be easy to find ways to slam it.) I plan on quoting some of these derogatory comments in another story I’m writing about a troll, so be crude and insulting with your feedback.
If you would prefer to just leave negative comments here, that would be cool. Perhaps you remember some especially rude and grammatically-incorrect gems from previous postings. The ones I have come up with for my troll satire are just too clever to have been posted by an ignorant troll. I need more gusto, more verve, but, most importantly, more ignorance.
‘Your writing stinks like dogshit.’
‘You should be using brown text, because this is crap.’
Thank you for contributing.
This is sort of a life-imitates-art situation. I need negative comments, appearing to be coming from Sveni, the Viking Rock Star’s fans. This would give my story an air of authenticity, and give you an excuse to vent. (The story is not particularly well-written, so it should be easy to find ways to slam it.) I plan on quoting some of these derogatory comments in another story I’m writing about a troll, so be crude and insulting with your feedback.
If you would prefer to just leave negative comments here, that would be cool. Perhaps you remember some especially rude and grammatically-incorrect gems from previous postings. The ones I have come up with for my troll satire are just too clever to have been posted by an ignorant troll. I need more gusto, more verve, but, most importantly, more ignorance.
‘Your writing stinks like dogshit.’
‘You should be using brown text, because this is crap.’
Thank you for contributing.