Tradeing for rent

[joe62901]

A young couple renting from me is haveing trouble coming up with the rent. Like most young couples. By the way this is true. Anyway, Steph is 22 and Tims is 24 . Tim asked me one day is I would trade them other things for rent and I asked like what? He said point blank Steph. I asked what they had in mind and he said twice a week for an hour just her and me in trade for rent. He said I could do anything I want except pain.I am not into that anyway. I am 47 nice looking and in shape. Steph is a sweet thin blonde with what looks like b cup titties. Tim is sort of a geek to me. Dont know how he got her. Well I said we could try it. First meeting I said tim would have to be there. I didnt want her saying I forced her and I thought I would have Tim take my cock and place it at the entrance to her pussy as I pushed it in the first time. Well they Both agreed . I can finish this, but I am not sure I am even posting this in the right place. Let me know and I can fill you in on the rest. Also we are still tradeing .

 

[JRaven]

Aren't you getting a deal! Escorts in my area run about $150-$200 an hour. (Don't ask me how I know!) You're getting an hour twice a week, that's eight hours a month. At the low end, that would be $1,200 a month in services. Must be one hell of a place you're renting them!

Generally, this forum is where we exchange ideas for stories. Readers often post here with an idea, hoping an author will pick it up and write it. Sometimes, we banter an idea around some, working out various details. So there's really no problem posting this here if your intention is for someone to write a story about it.

Or, you can write the story yourself. There are plenty of resources here for fledgling authors. Check out the first post in this thread: Welcome Authors! Please Read

If you're not going to write it, tell us about the first meeting. How nervous was she? Did the guy freak watching you with her?

Jenny

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Wrote a nonconsent story like this: Starving Artist


which was loosely based on my ex's life... he was landlord and used to trade sex for rent...

hence the reason he's my ex.. .

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Wrote a nonconsent story like this: Starving Artist


which was loosely based on my ex's life... he was landlord and used to trade sex for rent...

hence the reason he's my ex.. .

his loss.

 

[joe62901]

still trading

I wanted to say this couple is not a pair of low lifes or anything. They are a nice looking clean classy couple. The apartment they live in is upscale and well furnished. Which is probably why they are crunched for money. The first time I went to thier apt. Steph was in a bath robe when I came in . Tim was fully dressed. Tim and I really did not know where to start and then Steph justs drops her robe and says "well Joe follow me please". You bet I followed. Her small perfect ass swaying before my eyes.We went to thier bedroom and she started to undress me. I stared at her breast, standing firm and lovely. I looked over at Tim standing by the door and told him to strip too. I wanted to see if this was turning him on and also I wanted all 3 of us naked .When Steph pulled my pants down my 7 1/2 inch cock sprug up right by her lips. I saw her look at tim and he nodded slighty an she kissed the tip of my cock. My cock is very thick . I saw her eyes when it poped out and I saw Tims eyes too. Tim has a 5 inch peter ,which was hard but only as thick as a hotdog. Maybe a little thicker ,but not much. He was watching and was bone hard.Steph didnt suck my cock that good and I wanted to get on with it . I thought later I could teach her how I wanted it sucked.
I will try and write more later. I have to go to work now. If anyone could use this for a story idea please feel free. I dont think I could write very well.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

I wanted to say this couple is not a pair of low lifes or anything. They are a nice looking clean classy couple. The apartment they live in is upscale and well furnished. Which is probably why they are crunched for money. The first time I went to thier apt. Steph was in a bath robe when I came in . Tim was fully dressed. Tim and I really did not know where to start and then Steph justs drops her robe and says "well Joe follow me please". You bet I followed. Her small perfect ass swaying before my eyes.We went to thier bedroom and she started to undress me. I stared at her breast, standing firm and lovely. I looked over at Tim standing by the door and told him to strip too. I wanted to see if this was turning him on and also I wanted all 3 of us naked .When Steph pulled my pants down my 7 1/2 inch cock sprug up right by her lips. I saw her look at tim and he nodded slighty an she kissed the tip of my cock. My cock is very thick . I saw her eyes when it poped out and I saw Tims eyes too. Tim has a 5 inch peter ,which was hard but only as thick as a hotdog. Maybe a little thicker ,but not much. He was watching and was bone hard.Steph didnt suck my cock that good and I wanted to get on with it . I thought later I could teach her how I wanted it sucked.
I will try and write more later. I have to go to work now. If anyone could use this for a story idea please feel free. I dont think I could write very well.

it could make a story, sure. why don't you give it a try yourself? you never know, you could start something you really enjoy doing.

 

[bareman]

give it a shot

I agree with geeronimo...you ought to try writing it yourself. There are folks here willing to edit if you need it. Sounds like it could make a hot story...

 

[geronimo_appleby]

i may even give it a shot myself, once i get through this one i'm working on now... and the other one i'm working on. but i think given a little thought we could round the whole thing out, get some back story in there, and even put in a little twist

 

[emap]

If your going to write it, AVOID using dimensions like the plague.

OK, alot of that is personal preference, but you would be surprised how many people picture themselves doing the story, and if you start listing dimensions of body parts they get turned off and you get bad reviews/votes.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

If your going to write it, AVOID using dimensions like the plague.

OK, alot of that is personal preference, but you would be surprised how many people picture themselves doing the story, and if you start listing dimensions of body parts they get turned off and you get bad reviews/votes.

i agree. leave some to the imagination.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I think what you've written so far is a great start to a story. The fact that it is a true one means you could capture the feelings and stuff yourself. If you decide not to write it as a story. . . then please keep telling about it here. You've got my interest. I too would stay away from dimensions. I have one story that mentions dimensions and that is only because I was describing my spouse.

 

[jeninflorida]

i'm not sure how many 'wives' would take a lover, just cuz he's hung....

 

[snooper]

If your going to write it, AVOID using dimensions like the plague. ...

Yes. As I say to some authors when editing:

You seem obsessed with statistics. When I look at a woman I don’t think in terms of how many inches her bust is. I don’t believe that a woman looks at a man’s penis and thinks, ‘How many inches is that?’ Compare: “In came Mrs. Fezziwig. She was 5’ 11”, 280lbs, 48DD-44-48. She was smiling.” with Charles Dickens’ original: “In came Mrs.Fezziwig, one vast substantial smile.” I don’t expect you to write like Dickens, but I do hope you’ll stop writing like a police pathologist.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Yes. As I say to some authors when editing:

You seem obsessed with statistics. When I look at a woman I don’t think in terms of how many inches her bust is. I don’t believe that a woman looks at a man’s penis and thinks, ‘How many inches is that?’ Compare: “In came Mrs. Fezziwig. She was 5’ 11”, 280lbs, 48DD-44-48. She was smiling.” with Charles Dickens’ original: “In came Mrs.Fezziwig, one vast substantial smile.” I don’t expect you to write like Dickens, but I do hope you’ll stop writing like a police pathologist.

48DD !

 

[GuyJD]

I already did a story like this in "Nothing Going On But The Rent"-Part I Just click the link below my sig if you're interested in reading it.

It's about a pregnant teen who lives with her drug addicted boyfriend in a housing project. Needless to say, the bf failed to pay the rent and the housing agent comes for "payment or service" and all sex breaks loose.

 

[GuyJD]

If your going to write it, AVOID using dimensions like the plague.

OK, alot of that is personal preference, but you would be surprised how many people picture themselves doing the story, and if you start listing dimensions of body parts they get turned off and you get bad reviews/votes.

It's okay to do a brief description on the main characters but NEVER elaborate on them. In other words, mention the girl's/woman's 34C breasts but not her "volumptious, over whelming, overly perky 34C breasts that turned every man's head and stopped traffic". Over use of metaphors and descriptive writing can put anyone to sleep.

 

[snooper]

It's okay to do a brief description on the main characters but NEVER elaborate on them. In other words, mention the girl's/woman's 34C breasts but not her "volumptious, over whelming, overly perky 34C breasts that turned every man's head and stopped traffic". Over use of metaphors and descriptive writing can put anyone to sleep.

When I look at a woman I don’t think in terms of how many inches her bust is. I don’t believe that a woman looks at a man’s penis and thinks, ‘How many inches is that?’ Compare: “In came Mrs. Fezziwig. She was 5’ 11”, 280lbs, 48DD-44-48. She was smiling.” with Charles Dickens’ original: “In came Mrs.Fezziwig, one vast substantial smile. I don’t expect Lit authors to write like Dickens, but I do hope that one day they will stop writing like police pathologists reporting on a post mortem.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

When I look at a woman I don’t think in terms of how many inches her bust is. I don’t believe that a woman looks at a man’s penis and thinks, ‘How many inches is that?’ Compare: “In came Mrs. Fezziwig. She was 5’ 11”, 280lbs, 48DD-44-48. She was smiling.” with Charles Dickens’ original: “In came Mrs.Fezziwig, one vast substantial smile. I don’t expect Lit authors to write like Dickens, but I do hope that one day they will stop writing like police pathologists reporting on a post mortem.

Interesting. I'm no Dickens, but I hope I don't write like a pathologist's report!

 

[jeninflorida]

I wanted to say this couple is not a pair of low lifes or anything. They are a nice looking clean classy couple. The apartment they live in is upscale and well furnished. Which is probably why they are crunched for money. The first time I went to thier apt. Steph was in a bath robe when I came in . Tim was fully dressed. Tim and I really did not know where to start and then Steph justs drops her robe and says "well Joe follow me please". You bet I followed. Her small perfect ass swaying before my eyes.We went to thier bedroom and she started to undress me. I stared at her breast, standing firm and lovely. I looked over at Tim standing by the door and told him to strip too. I wanted to see if this was turning him on and also I wanted all 3 of us naked .When Steph pulled my pants down my 7 1/2 inch cock sprug up right by her lips. I saw her look at tim and he nodded slighty an she kissed the tip of my cock. My cock is very thick . I saw her eyes when it poped out and I saw Tims eyes too. Tim has a 5 inch peter ,which was hard but only as thick as a hotdog. Maybe a little thicker ,but not much. He was watching and was bone hard.Steph didnt suck my cock that good and I wanted to get on with it . I thought later I could teach her how I wanted it sucked.
I will try and write more later. I have to go to work now. If anyone could use this for a story idea please feel free. I dont think I could write very well.

the 'stud' having a larger ... will get you a lot of negative feedback. i'm not sure i would talk about how big he was, plus, who ever brings a tape measure to bed?

 

[Texguy84]

the 'stud' having a larger ... will get you a lot of negative feedback. i'm not sure i would talk about how big he was, plus, who ever brings a tape measure to bed?

Well, I know *I* do (joking).

A thought... what if the husband was already substantial to begin with? Or even better... what if he was TOO substantial? A woman finds that she prefers a stud with a 6 or 7 incher to her husbands 14 inch club? You could play up the betrayal aspect by having her do something like letting the smaller man fuck her in the ass, something her husband always wanted but was always refused due to his size.

 

[jerryjwj]

For Real

For Real Joe,

What a sweet deal. I was a landlord for thirteen years. Rented some upscale lofts and some dumps. Rented to strippers four times in thirteen years. Rented to some sluts, but never once did even one of them take their clothes of for me.

One time one of the strippers suggested she might be friendly but she was vague and non-committal. I knew that she was teasing me and that it would never happen. Then one stripper was hurting for the rent. She never even suggested paying with sex.

Where did you say you are from. Maybe I should buy some rental property there.

Anyway. Please do tell more. At least I can enjoy by proxy. Don't worry about how your right or some of the criticism. If you find that writing turns you on or satisfies you in some way, you will quickly pick up the basics. If you tell us all about it in any writing style or with what ever ability you have, without worrying about making mistakes, you will have the best chance of finding out if you like writing about sex.

Telling us that she took the initiative was not only exciting to imagine but it was also exactly the kind of thing you want to focus on in writing about the experience.

I am just going to list a few subjects you could cover. Maybe give you some ideas about what things to tell us about. Perhaps tell us what she did to you next, and when you got your bearing so to speak. You know when you realized that this was for real and she was going to be a good lay. Then tell us what was the first thing you did to her was. Tell us if you sensed any surprise or hesitation or nervousness. Or was she eager and calm?

Did she lay down and open her legs or did she coax you into another position? Did she let you guide her into a position?

You mentioned that this is still going on. Have you taken any initiative? Perhaps telling her exactly what you want and give yourself an hour of intense pleasure that you choreograph. Now reading about how she reacts to that and reading about how she responds would be interesting.

Have fun and don't worry about writing prowess. Just do it. If you find it rewarding, I am sure you will find your style. If you don't find it rewarding, at least some readers will have the details to a true story to enjoy.

Jerry

 

[jeninflorida]

Well, I know *I* do (joking).

A thought... what if the husband was already substantial to begin with? Or even better... what if he was TOO substantial? A woman finds that she prefers a stud with a 6 or 7 incher to her husbands 14 inch club? You could play up the betrayal aspect by having her do something like letting the smaller man fuck her in the ass, something her husband always wanted but was always refused due to his size.

I had a gf back in CA who's hubby was too big but she enjoyed anal sex...maybe