Tour group - where would you take this?

[TheWritingGroup]

Most of us have seen a stereotypical tour group. A big group of people speaking what you think is probably Mandarin (or Italian, or ...), with an official leader waving a flag to help them all stay together. They fill up entire sidewalks and streets, blocking the path of everyone else. They take lots of pictures, meaning they block even more space when the photographers step back from the subjects.

So how could you turn that into a Literotica story?

I'll toss out an idea or four.

• The tour guide takes the group into a Thai brothel. It's PoV from one or more tourists. They get to see sexy, sexy stuff, and at the end they're offered an "intimate tour" for an additional fee. The brothel is kicking back a percentage to the tour guide, who technically isn't supposed to be leading groups there.
  • A girl is separated from the tour, doesn't speak Thai, and is confused with a prostitute. Could go several ways, from the sleaziest "girl gets trafficked" to an adventure story where she runs, but still doesn't speak Thai and is lost in Bangkok (and eventually meets a charming Mandarin (Italian, Arabic)-speaker who buys her a drink and walks her back to the hotel ... and back to her room ... and into her bed). Feel free to use different genders if that makes for a fun story!
• There are two families with children in the tour. The dads disappear into the bar together. The moms put the littles to bed, try some of the local wine, and end up putting each other to bed, the fun way. The dads come back in the early morning hours, having done something:
  • Hired a local prostitute for a threesome.
  • Also fucked each other.
  • Agreed to a wife-swap.
  • Been arrested for public drunkenness and needed someone from the tour company to get them out of lockup, and they're deeply ashamed.
    • Their wives punish them by demanding they watch the kids the next night, while the moms go out on the town together.
      • And hire a prostitute for a threesome!
  • This one relies on stereotypical guy behavior, so swap genders at your own peril.
• The entire tour group is stranded at an airport partway home from their tour, due to weather. Lots of people have to share rooms, because there just aren't many rooms in town since so many flights are canceled. It's Tokyo, so two (or more!) people are put up at a love hotel, which is equipped with fetish gear, sex toys, a bed made to look like a kaiju's mouth, etc. They "miss" their flight home to spend another day there together.
  • Make it taboo by having the people stuck in the love hotel be relatives (which is why they were stuffed in there together).
  • Worth mentioning: some love hotels lock the doors of the rooms, so you need them to buzz you out. You literally can't get out unless the hotel staff let you. (It's a way to keep their guests from running into each other in the halls, since the whole point of love hotels is secret nookie.) In a weather disaster like I just invented two bullets up from here, the system goes down, so the guests are literally trapped together, unable to escape their sinful, but irresistible attraction ....

What obvious plots am I missing? Would this be a fun little thing to actually write? None of these stories would have to be long.

Have any of you already written a story like this?

-Billie

 

[THBGato]

Slow burning attraction between two of the women on the tour, which may or may not be consummated. They acknowledge their attraction to each other, and tell each other, in detail, what they would do to one another if they could. The tension, the fear of discovery (imagine they are in a country where homosexuality is illegal), would add to the eroticism.

Ideally, bi_cathy would write it!

 

[Bramblethorn]

This might fit better in the Story Ideas forum.

 

[TheWritingGroup]

This might fit better in the Story Ideas forum.

You mean, where I meant to post it? Wow, how did I do that?

I think I'll report my own thread and ask the mods to move it.

-Billie

 

[Rob_Royale]

Honestly, it's a near-perfect opening for a couples-swap story. Away from home, all their friends, family, and obligations, a couple might let themselves have a wild affair with no one the wiser back home.

I imagine a mature couple (Smith) of empty nesters take a vacation. This works better if the writer uses a location that they have already been. It adds authenticity to the story. There, on a local tour, they meet a young couple (Willson) and hit it off. They spend a few days together, enjoying the tour, and have a great time, maybe hitting a nude beach, amping up the sexual tension.

That night, the young husband boldly asks if the Smiths would be open to a little partner swapping. He explains that he and his wife are occasional swingers and really find the Smiths attractive.

Initially, the Smiths are taken aback and stammer nervously for a minute or so. Finally, the young husband, tells them to forget it for the moment, but perhaps talk about it that night.

The Smiths do indeed talk about it in their suite and get wildly aroused, having incredible sex that night.

The next night? Who knows? Maybe they have an incredible night. Maybe one of them has an incredible night while the other can't bring themselves to do it. Now there is an inequity between them and that needs to be sorted out before the plane ride home. Maybe a threesome or foursome is the way to do that?

 

[KimAwakened]

Slow burning attraction between two of the women on the tour, which may or may not be consummated. They acknowledge their attraction to each other, and tell each other, in detail, what they would do to one another if they could. The tension, the fear of discovery (imagine they are in a country where homosexuality is illegal), would add to the eroticism.

Ideally, bi_cathy would write it!

I'll second that one.

 

[JohnnyNotCraig]

I think the first one would be more fitting if it was a guy who got separated from the group and ended up in a Thai trans brothel and ends up with a ladyboy or two

 

[TheWritingGroup]

I think the first one would be more fitting if it was a guy who got separated from the group and ended up in a Thai trans brothel and ends up with a ladyboy or two

That's an interesting story idea. I am curious, though, why it's "fitting"? What is it fitting into?

My story-inventing brain just rewrote your idea (as it does), to a guy waking up from a drunk in Chiang Mai, to find himself in a room in a trans brothel, with a beautiful ladyboy saying stuff to him. He is naked and she's in pretty lingerie. He has no idea what happened between them. Nobody in the brothel (except our viewpoint character) knows more than 10 words of English. Go!

-Billie

 

[JohnnyNotCraig]

It’s fitting to me because I think most people associate Thailand with trans (ladyboys) and it seems like a hot idea to have a hung trans get suck off and get railed by a guy who’s straight and possibly has a slightly smaller cock than the trans woman.

 

[bi_cathy]

Slow burning attraction between two of the women on the tour, which may or may not be consummated. They acknowledge their attraction to each other, and tell each other, in detail, what they would do to one another if they could. The tension, the fear of discovery (imagine they are in a country where homosexuality is illegal), would add to the eroticism.

Ideally, bi_cathy would write it!

Am I getting assignments now?

At the rate I write and with my backlog of ideas, this will be done by 2035. But it will be epic!

 

[LiverpoolMaster]

There are a lot of walking tours led around my own local city... and I mean a lot.

Unfortunately there's no real 'red light' district - the area that comes closest to that description lies away from the central area where the tours take place. That however would be no bar to the imagination.

My take on this would need no ulterior motives or kickbacks paid to the guide. I would simply have a couple where the (frustrated) wife becomes detached from the main party during a walk through a maze of very narrow, winding streets. Somewhat lost, she looks to enquire inside a doorway.. where she is taken for one of the 'girls' by a customer... and ends up enjoying every last moment. She rejoins the main party just before they raise the alarm, giving out excuses for her lateness...

 

[Reenigam]

There are a lot of walking tours led around my own local city... and I mean a lot.
Unfortunately there's no real 'red light' district - the area that comes closest to that description lies away from the central area where the tours take place. That however would be no bar to the imagination.
My take on this would need no ulterior motives or kickbacks paid to the guide. I would simply have a couple where the (frustrated) wife becomes detached from the main party during a walk through a maze of very narrow, winding streets. Somewhat lost, she looks to enquire inside a doorway.. where she is taken for one of the 'girls' by a customer... and ends up enjoying every last moment. She rejoins the main party just before they raise the alarm, giving out excuses for her lateness...

Great thought. You could spend some time setting a scene where the couple - maybe from the US or Japan - are on an organised 10 day tour of England, stopping each night at a new location and spending the day before/after sightseeing. This preamble would describe the reasons for the wife's gradual alienation from and frustration with hubby.

 

[000zing]

Yes, a nice little short story already in the making.