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[mikado2005]

I am looking for comments on my Novella. It follows the erotic adventures of a motorcyclist vagabond traveling around the country.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=411848

This is the link to the lead story. It is posted under Novels/Novellas.

I like this story, but I consider myself prejudiced. I'd like feedback (negative or positive) on what others think about it. Be brutal if it deserves it, but be honest. I can take it. I have received mostly positive anonymous feedback so far. I have lot more writing in me and want to produce works that people will want to see more of.

Thanks,

mikado2005

 

[mikado2005]

The entire story series is posted now.

What do you think?

 

[mikado2005]

I'm still looking for feedback, but at least my scores are coming up. I should have a letter next to some of my chapters and other stories if I can get a few more votes in the right direction.

 

[mikado2005]

WooHoo!!! Got my first H today. It was for one of my other stories, but its all good.

Feel free to join in the celebration.