Too perverse for Lit?

[sirhugs]

Wifey is having coffee at the local outlet. she notices a young woman sobbing in the corner. Asks what is the problem. The girl (18+) has no money, spent the pennies she scrounged on the street on a cup of soup, but is still starving.

Wifey takes the girl home, showers her, loans her clothes & feeds her. In thanks, girl offers the wife sex. at first wife says no, but after the girl describes the joys of sapphic desire, wifey has to try it. has most mind blowing orgasm ever.

hubby arrives home. wife tells girl to hide in garage. wifey then has best sex hubby ever had. around midnight, wifey wakes up (or is it hubby?). hears noises. girl is still in garage, asleep....

soon, the girl becomes their sex slave in return for food & shelter.

 

[MayorReynolds]

How does the girl feel about this arrangement? Is she happy to keep fucking the couple for food and shelter or are there scenes of guilt and reluctance?

What types of sex acts is she told or expected to perform? Is it standard vanilla, is a little bondage involved, or is there scat and sadistic torture?

How did she arrive at being homeless to begin with?

Could part of the arrangement, perhaps, involve the couple putting money into a savings account so the girl can eventually move out and start fresh? That would make the girl more of a live-in prostitute than a sex slave. Would that angle work better for you?

As for "too perverse," probably not. There's likely worse posted here. It's unique, I'll say that.

 

[Reshbod]

Wifey is having coffee at the local outlet. she notices a young woman sobbing in the corner. Asks what is the problem. The girl (18+) has no money, spent the pennies she scrounged on the street on a cup of soup, but is still starving.

Wifey takes the girl home, showers her, loans her clothes & feeds her. In thanks, girl offers the wife sex. at first wife says no, but after the girl describes the joys of sapphic desire, wifey has to try it. has most mind blowing orgasm ever.

hubby arrives home. wife tells girl to hide in garage. wifey then has best sex hubby ever had. around midnight, wifey wakes up (or is it hubby?). hears noises. girl is still in garage, asleep....

soon, the girl becomes their sex slave in return for food & shelter.

You must be new here, this is rather quite tame as story ideas go.

 

[Carnevil9]

Yeah, I don't think it's perverse at all, by Lit standards. I've written much more perverse stuff than this.

That said, I think it's a great idea for a story, with lots of possibilities.

 

[sr71plt]

I think there are a lot of similar stories on Lit.--I've written a few of them myself from different sexual preferences.

 

[OurDirtyStory]

Not too perverse at all. Great idea for a story. Throw in a party with her dressed as the maid where the couple watch the guests lust over her.

 

[sirhugs]

You must be new here, this is rather quite tame as story ideas go.

as you must know, I'm old here. old as dirt. but the slavery aspect still makes me skeevy.

 

[lovecraft68]

I've done a version of that, but in mine the girl is very inexperienced and shy and the wife and husband seduce her.

They make an arrangement with her that she can live with them, have a car and they feed and clothe her and help her with college. In exchange she is their little sex toy(nothing rough) they dress her up and even travel with her

Its called the perfect pet.

 

[JustaSCOUNDREL]

as you must know, I'm old here. old as dirt. but the slavery aspect still makes me skeevy.

Would it be any better for you were she to offer herself to them in return for a place to stay and some decent clothing? She tells them she will do anything they want with her just so long as she doesn't have to go back to living on the street again.

Mike

 

[sirhugs]

Would it be any better for you were she to offer herself to them in return for a place to stay and some decent clothing? She tells them she will do anything they want with her just so long as she doesn't have to go back to living on the street again.

Mike

and is it her idea that thy build a cage in the corner of the garage, to lock her in when she is naughty?

 

[lovecraft68]

and is it her idea that thy build a cage in the corner of the garage, to lock her in when she is naughty?

If you're the author you tell us.

As for the cage? there are women-and men-who do enjoy that level of submission/humiliation.

I'm confused about your post. It seems you have this idea, but you are squickish about sexual slavery.

That's fine we all have our squicks, but you seem to be acting as if you have to write this as a slave situation. You can write it to be completely consensual to whatever level or you could simply as I did make her a "playful" little pet.

Seems like you're trying talk yourself into writing something you loathe. I wouldn't bother you'll upset yourself and it will come out like shit on top of it.

 

[sirhugs]

If you're the author you tell us.

As for the cage? there are women-and men-who do enjoy that level of submission/humiliation.

I'm confused about your post. It seems you have this idea, but you are squickish about sexual slavery.

That's fine we all have our squicks, but you seem to be acting as if you have to write this as a slave situation. You can write it to be completely consensual to whatever level or you could simply as I did make her a "playful" little pet.

Seems like you're trying talk yourself into writing something you loathe. I wouldn't bother you'll upset yourself and it will come out like shit on top of it.

Oh I doubt I'll ever try to write it. I have dozens of ideas for the time I have to write a single story. I just wanted to see what people thought of it & maybe somebody else might like it & write it.

I sometimes write things that make me squishy- in Elysium Island Adventures, there's a machete killing fergoshsakes. Through squishy comes growth.

Though sometimes I just want to get the images out of my brain but putting them into posts. My very first Lit story started for that reason, as have others from time to time.

 

[MayorReynolds]

Kink where there's no consent isn't my thing. But if it's somebody else's thing, I don't judge. That's just their thing.

I know you said you'll probably never write this, but here's my rule of thumb: if the subject matter is something that's going to bother me, I'll either change it or stop pursuing it. I've always felt that if the author is hot and turned on by their own prose they channel more sexual energy into the story, and the resulting rock-hard, dripping cunt juice narrative will get the reader incredibly turned on as well.

But on the other hand, if the author's too squeamish about what they're writing it reflects in the story. It's all about confidence. It's like riding a horse. If its rider is nervous and apprehensive, the horse will pick up on it and react badly.

Like I and others have suggested, why not just make it a live-in prostitute story? The girl agrees to be the couple's fuck doll in exchange for food, shelter, hot water and money. After a year or so as the sexkeeper, the girl has enough money and accumulated interest in a savings account to not only move out but pay for a decent education. She makes something out of herself, and then there's room for sequels where she has anniversaries and vacations with her former benefactors.

I'd read that in a heartbeat. I wish I'd come up with that idea.

 

[joelafayette]

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[sirhugs]

Kink where there's no consent isn't my thing. But if it's somebody else's thing, I don't judge. That's just their thing.

I know you said you'll probably never write this, but here's my rule of thumb: if the subject matter is something that's going to bother me, I'll either change it or stop pursuing it. I've always felt that if the author is hot and turned on by their own prose they channel more sexual energy into the story, and the resulting rock-hard, dripping cunt juice narrative will get the reader incredibly turned on as well.

But on the other hand, if the author's too squeamish about what they're writing it reflects in the story. It's all about confidence. It's like riding a horse. If its rider is nervous and apprehensive, the horse will pick up on it and react badly.

Like I and others have suggested, why not just make it a live-in prostitute story? The girl agrees to be the couple's fuck doll in exchange for food, shelter, hot water and money. After a year or so as the sexkeeper, the girl has enough money and accumulated interest in a savings account to not only move out but pay for a decent education. She makes something out of herself, and then there's room for sequels where she has anniversaries and vacations with her former benefactors.

I'd read that in a heartbeat. I wish I'd come up with that idea.

what is this accumulated interest of which you speak?

 

[Sean Renaud]

I don't think accumlated interest works that way in the real world. Even if it did isn't at least part of the goal to keep the girl indefinitely?

 

[sirhugs]

I don't think accumlated interest works that way in the real world. Even if it did isn't at least part of the goal to keep the girl indefinitely?

My point was that right now, in the real world, interest is really largely fictional.

If she had a 0.9 rate (a top rate these days) on $10,000.00 in a year, she'd earn $90, not including compounding- and that's AFTER she has saved up the 10K.

 

[Sean Renaud]

Oh I was agreeing with you on that point.

 

[MayorReynolds]

Agreed. Unless A). This is set in a universe with much higher interest rates or B). You just ignore the concept of interest entirely and run with "it's a savings account."

 

[Sean Renaud]

I'm still not really sold on why you would pay a slave at all. HEre's the thing if you could afford to pay a girl enough to put her through college (especially these days) you could likely find a girl who isn't starving on the streets to deal with it. After just one year at that? We're talking tens of thousands of dollars, quite possibly more depending on what school your talking about and if she's going to be focused on school or going to school and working at the same time. For that kind of money you could probably go onto a porn modeling site, explain what you want and have your pick of the litter. Especially when you factor in that there are girls who want the money but would love the additional anominity here.

I like the core of this idea but I think trying to dial back the squick factor actually just causes the story to start falling apart.

 

[lovecraft68]

I don't mind realism and details in stories, but when it comes down to discussing interest rates anything erotic has now just flown out the door.

 

[SquirtnBrat]

Not too perverse.. But...

I don't mind realism and details in stories, but when it comes down to discussing interest rates anything erotic has now just flown out the door.

^ I have to agree!

 

[i_would]

I'd like to suggest a different tack on at least the start of the story. A what I think is a more realistic storyline.

OK so this girl and the wife have had sex - but why should she be hiding? Instead she may just be introduced to the husband as someone who is in need of a roof over her head, and in return can help in their household. Maybe wife is also working, so they can do very well with someone to clean and cook for them.

Of course the wife has a hidden agenda, as her sexual interest in the same sex has been awakened, and her sexual relationship with her new live-in maid deepens.

Now some time later, when they get settled in, the husband finds out the girl is more than just a help in the household to his wife. And while he did enjoy looking at her and so, he's always been faithful.

Of course he is angry - maybe very angry - at both of them. For his wife to cheat on him, for the girl to seduce his wife, maybe even for not letting him join? The latter is of course the least realistic imho.

And now the question: how'd he handle that anger. Threaten to kick them out, (attempt to) rape them both, etc. Maybe the wife is very smart and manipulative and convinces him she was just seduced and couldn't help herself, and together they punish the poor girl. Plenty of directions possible from here.

 

[i_would]

I don't mind realism and details in stories, but when it comes down to discussing interest rates anything erotic has now just flown out the door.

Absolutely, and it's usually totally irrelevant to the actual story line.

Where money comes in the story, I'd say don't bother with anything like interest rates and stuff like that. I don't even use currencies in my stories - let the reader fill in whether they work with Euros, US Dollars, Bitcoin, or Zambinian Peso.

When it comes to "how much to start your own company on" or "paying off a student's loan", let it be something like "one year of savings" or whatever period is convenient for the story.