Too many prattles on lit

[Hotrooster1989]

Looking for editor

Would anyone be interested in proof reading edit of 3 part series about young male initially hired as garden hand for rich Milf(s) and soon becomes lover to Milf and milfs friends

 

[KeithD]

You aren't likely to get a response without having a specific story finished and polished as best you can and certainly not unless you identify a category and a wordage length.

 

[_Lynn_]

Honestly bores me to death with the insignificant details
My writings seek to capture the reader from the get go and get straight to the point
My first story was rejected “Mrs Anderson’s garden hand” and I’m not sure why
I changed my character dialogue a bit
I would like to find an experience editor I believe I have some great content and have had much experience on the matters in my daily life which reflects in writings
I’m not a sex nerd who writes things that would sound ridiculous in real life and choose to keep it classy yet volatile and “hot”
I would appreciate if someone would get in contact with me not only do I write I obviously read a lot aswell and would provide feedback on future editors work
Cheers heaps HR

Each rejection comes with a reason. They're generic but should give you enough information to fix the story and submit it again.

ETA: Taking a second look at your post makes me wonder if the rejection was in part due to your lack of punctuation.

 

[rae121452]

Honestly bores me to death with the insignificant details
My writings seek to capture the reader from the get go and get straight to the point
My first story was rejected “Mrs Anderson’s garden hand” and I’m not sure why
I changed my character dialogue a bit
I would like to find an experience editor I believe I have some great content and have had much experience on the matters in my daily life which reflects in writings
I’m not a sex nerd who writes things that would sound ridiculous in real life and choose to keep it classy yet volatile and “hot”
I would appreciate if someone would get in contact with me not only do I write I obviously read a lot aswell and would provide feedback on future editors work
Cheers heaps HR

never mind.

 

[yukonnights]

Honestly bores me to death with the insignificant details
My writings seek to capture the reader from the get go and get straight to the point
My first story was rejected “Mrs Anderson’s garden hand” and I’m not sure why
I changed my character dialogue a bit
I would like to find an experience editor I believe I have some great content and have had much experience on the matters in my daily life which reflects in writings
I’m not a sex nerd who writes things that would sound ridiculous in real life and choose to keep it classy yet volatile and “hot”
I would appreciate if someone would get in contact with me not only do I write I obviously read a lot aswell and would provide feedback on future editors work
Cheers heaps HR

I looked for your "writings", but it seems you've still got nothing published to look at.

As to getting straight to the point; I'm assuming that you mean; 'straight to the sex'. On the other end of the scale, I and many other authors here try to create stories that provide enough background and character building to create a tale that is not just a sex scene or two — but instead we use those "extra" words to build the characters, set the appropriate scene, explore and expose the hidden emotions and feelings people experience during intimate sexual moments.

I'm not suggesting that you do anything different, I know that there is no "one shoe fits all" when it comes to fiction, music and so many other things. I look forward to reading your story. I'm just letting you know that experience has shown many here that a complete story is more appreciated by Lit readers than a page of flash fiction. Which brings up another issue; Literotica has numerous categories and each of those categories attracts different people. A one page romance isn't likely to be well received. IMO, your complaint about too many prattlers writing too many wordy stories on Literotica is misinformed. Maybe you'll prove otherwise.

Hopefully, you'll get your story worked on and published soon and we will know more about what you write. It'd be nice if you posted a link on your thread here to make it easier to find when it's published. Good luck on your first story!