Too Extreme For Most People

[EbonyGoddess1987]

My fantasies are too extreme for most people...and you're about to find out why. My fantasy story goes something like this....Well-dressed and affluent Black woman in her thirties, Board member of a Fortune 500 Company, goes into the dormitory of a 19-year-old blonde-haired white female student attending a community college.

WF : About time you got here, nigger bitch.
BW : Yes Mistress. Sorry I'm late.
WF : Get naked so I can see how you look today, bitch.
BW : Right away, Mistress.

WF : Get on your knees and suck my toes, you filthy monkey whore.
BW : Yes ma'am.
WF : You're gonna lick my toes good otherwise I'm gonna beat you senseless like I did your ancestors in the South.
BW : I won't disappoint you Mistress.

WF : You're so good at sucking toes. Today you get to suck my strapon.
BW : Absolutely, Mistress.
WF (smacks her) : Don't be so eager, you filthy ghetto whore.
BW : I'm sorry Mistress. I'm only a ghetto whore. I don't know any better.
WF : Damn right. Doesn't matter if you're a millionaire and wear $ 3000 business suits, you're still trash.
BW : Absolutely Mistress !
WF : After you lick my strapon dildo, it's going up your cunt and ass, you filthy Black bitch !
And the story goes on from there.....

 

[OlderBiMan]

My fantasies are too extreme for most people...and you're about to find out why. My fantasy story goes something like this....Well-dressed and affluent Black woman in her thirties, Board member of a Fortune 500 Company, goes into the dormitory of a 19-year-old blonde-haired white female student attending a community college.

WF : About time you got here, nigger bitch.
BW : Yes Mistress. Sorry I'm late.
WF : Get naked so I can see how you look today, bitch.
BW : Right away, Mistress.

WF : Get on your knees and suck my toes, you filthy monkey whore.
BW : Yes ma'am.
WF : You're gonna lick my toes good otherwise I'm gonna beat you senseless like I did your ancestors in the South.
BW : I won't disappoint you Mistress.

WF : You're so good at sucking toes. Today you get to suck my strapon.
BW : Absolutely, Mistress.
WF (smacks her) : Don't be so eager, you filthy ghetto whore.
BW : I'm sorry Mistress. I'm only a ghetto whore. I don't know any better.
WF : Damn right. Doesn't matter if you're a millionaire and wear $ 3000 business suits, you're still trash.
BW : Absolutely Mistress !
WF : After you lick my strapon dildo, it's going up your cunt and ass, you filthy Black bitch !
And the story goes on from there.....

this is strangely familiar...

 

[EbonyGoddess1987]

this is strangely familiar...

While seeking interesting responses, I posted it somewhere else as well.

 

[JMaxwell69]

Are you going to write it up?

It's a hot fantasy.

You've got to love writting that shatters taboos. (Well, I suppose, you don't HAVE to. I'm sure people have wanted to cudgel me to death for far less offensive story concepts.)

 

[EbonyGoddess1987]

Are you going to write it up?

It's a hot fantasy.

You've got to love writting that shatters taboos. (Well, I suppose, you don't HAVE to. I'm sure people have wanted to cudgel me to death for far less offensive story concepts.)

Well, I think I could give it a try.

 

[OlderBiMan]

Well, I think I could give it a try.

Dangerous territory, young lady. I'm old enough to remember riots, marches and bloodshed in the name of race...I wouldn't play with such a topic.

 

[EbonyGoddess1987]

Dangerous territory, young lady. I'm old enough to remember riots, marches and bloodshed in the name of race...I wouldn't play with such a topic.

It's just a story. And I'm hardly the first person to write about Black female submissives in interracial erotic tales.

http://www.asstr.org/~Neal/PuertoEsclava/PuertoEsclava-12.html

http://www.asstr.org/~Neal/PuertoEsclava/PuertoEsclava-20.html

http://www.asstr.org/~Neal/Teresa/Teresa-01.html

 

[EbonyGoddess1987]

And so what if I want to read or write those kinds of stories ?

 

[Epmd607]

There are more elegant ways to play with race and domination than simpleton graphic language. It's really not that impressive, or extreme, just having some white girl call a black woman some cliche hot button words.

 

[soflabbwlvr]

And so what if I want to read or write those kinds of stories ?

You will probably develop an audience that will enjoy them very much if you write them. You will also get flamed from another segment of the readership. I have learned that when dealing with taboo subject matter on this site, you have to have rather thick skin. Once you get used to the negative comments and learn to ignore them, you will probably enjoy interacting with your audience.

 

[JMaxwell69]

If you want to increase the edginess yet further don't introduce the fact that the black woman is affluent and successful until the end. Then she can dismiss her mistress back to work as her secretary, personal assistant, or choose any random menial office labor.

I also like the idea of an arch-dom or arch-domme that can stay mostly in the shadows, but who instructs / directs young blondy. I think this allows you to make little miss sweet bouncy blond ponytail more believable in the role of dominatrix. Perhaps, this is just me, but I can imagine the 19 year old girl being bitchy, but not necessarily domineering.


Of course, a masochistic bent may be beneficial as the writer will be excoriated in the comments section. Masochistic or that special kind of Sadistic that is displayed in a fondness for seeing comments that say essentially: "That was the worst story ever. Terrible. Horrible. And I ought to know, because I read every word .... twice."

 

[EbonyGoddess1987]

If you want to increase the edginess yet further don't introduce the fact that the black woman is affluent and successful until the end. Then she can dismiss her mistress back to work as her secretary, personal assistant, or choose any random menial office labor.

I also like the idea of an arch-dom or arch-domme that can stay mostly in the shadows, but who instructs / directs young blondy. I think this allows you to make little miss sweet bouncy blond ponytail more believable in the role of dominatrix. Perhaps, this is just me, but I can imagine the 19 year old girl being bitchy, but not necessarily domineering.


Of course, a masochistic bent may be beneficial as the writer will be excoriated in the comments section. Masochistic or that special kind of Sadistic that is displayed in a fondness for seeing comments that say essentially: "That was the worst story ever. Terrible. Horrible. And I ought to know, because I read every word .... twice."

lol. I think I'm going to like it here.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

If you want to increase the edginess yet further don't introduce the fact that the black woman is affluent and successful until the end. Then she can dismiss her mistress back to work as her secretary, personal assistant, or choose any random menial office labor. ...

Perhaps it's after hours and everybody but the boss has gone home ... except the trailer trash office cleaner ...

 

[Cold_Eyes]

Okay, it's pretty politically incorrect. But think of other BDSM situations in maledom ("You deserve to get fucked, you little bitch!") or femdom ("You men just can't resist us, can you! Lick my pussy, slave!"). Whatever gets you off.

Now, the important part. It's one word: Why?

How did this scene happen. Figure that out and you've got your story.

 

[JMaxwell69]

As the scene described is essentially one of role-playing in which all parties voluntarily enter into the situation (though the main character is ironically volunteering to give almost complete control over during the course of the session), I don't think the "why" needs to be more complex than the main character is turned on by, and wants to experience, submission and verbal humiliation.

If it were a situation in which the main character was not voluntarily agreeing to submit, the situation would be exceedingly different and a more nuanced explanation required, but then it would be a different (and far bleeker) story.

Now some might find it unbelievable that the main character would be interested in this kind of racially-charged and historically taboo submission, but the fact that the OP is means there is, in fact, someone into it. This is, of course, going to be a niche appeal story that will have a small audience that find it extremely appealing, novel, and arousing, and the rest will either genuinely dislike it or feel shame and self-loathing that it did arouse them.

Now it might be hard for the main character to find dominants who would be both willing to oblige her penchant for this particular form of degradation and who wouldn't be completely nuts. So a little character development there might be useful to explain how she found a dominant who wouldn't cringe in shame using racial slurs like "nigger" or "monkey", but also wasn't so full of hate that they'd carve a Swastika in her chest. This is not to say that you couldn't find someone who got off on the taboo edginess of this that was not, in fact, virulently racist, because I know such people exist. I'm just saying you may have to convince reader.

 

[Salvor-Hardon]

If you want to increase the edginess yet further don't introduce the fact that the black woman is affluent and successful until the end. Then she can dismiss her mistress back to work as her secretary, personal assistant, or choose any random menial office labor.

I also like the idea of an arch-dom or arch-domme that can stay mostly in the shadows, but who instructs / directs young blondy. I think this allows you to make little miss sweet bouncy blond ponytail more believable in the role of dominatrix. Perhaps, this is just me, but I can imagine the 19 year old girl being bitchy, but not necessarily domineering.


Of course, a masochistic bent may be beneficial as the writer will be excoriated in the comments section. Masochistic or that special kind of Sadistic that is displayed in a fondness for seeing comments that say essentially: "That was the worst story ever. Terrible. Horrible. And I ought to know, because I read every word .... twice."

lol. I think I'm going to like it here.

I'm wondering if we need to start an Atlanta Erotic writers Group meeting

 

[jeninflorida]

So many ways to spin this idea, and almost perfect for Samualx. Sad part about our culture is that a story like this can be spun into a racist….or maybe it’s just me. I would be afraid to touch this story for being labeled that.

The idea of a secret affair...

Or the idea that the older woman had been in love with the 19 year old for years...

Or the idea that the college girl has blackmailed the woman into sex...

My fantasies are too extreme for most people...and you're about to find out why. My fantasy story goes something like this....Well-dressed and affluent Black woman in her thirties, Board member of a Fortune 500 Company, goes into the dormitory of a 19-year-old blonde-haired white female student attending a community college.

WF : About time you got here, nigger bitch.
BW : Yes Mistress. Sorry I'm late.
WF : Get naked so I can see how you look today, bitch.
BW : Right away, Mistress.

WF : Get on your knees and suck my toes, you filthy monkey whore.
BW : Yes ma'am.
WF : You're gonna lick my toes good otherwise I'm gonna beat you senseless like I did your ancestors in the South.
BW : I won't disappoint you Mistress.

WF : You're so good at sucking toes. Today you get to suck my strapon.
BW : Absolutely, Mistress.
WF (smacks her) : Don't be so eager, you filthy ghetto whore.
BW : I'm sorry Mistress. I'm only a ghetto whore. I don't know any better.
WF : Damn right. Doesn't matter if you're a millionaire and wear $ 3000 business suits, you're still trash.
BW : Absolutely Mistress !
WF : After you lick my strapon dildo, it's going up your cunt and ass, you filthy Black bitch !
And the story goes on from there.....

 

[Sean Renaud]

So many ways to spin this idea, and almost perfect for Samualx. Sad part about our culture is that a story like this can be spun into a racist….or maybe it’s just me. I would be afraid to touch this story for being labeled that.

The idea of a secret affair...

Or the idea that the older woman had been in love with the 19 year old for years...

Or the idea that the college girl has blackmailed the woman into sex...

Did you really say that? Do you know now that this is blatant pure as the driven snow racist? If you enjoy these stories you are a racist. If you write these stories you are a racist. Period, it's not twisting or spinning it's already there. Now that I've stated facts.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=407460

 

[Carnevil9]

Dangerous territory, young lady. I'm old enough to remember riots, marches and bloodshed in the name of race...I wouldn't play with such a topic.

All the more reason to write it. Shattering icons is part of our mission!.....Carney (who is also old enough to remember)

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

So many ways to spin this idea, and almost perfect for Samualx. Sad part about our culture is that a story like this can be spun into a racist….or maybe it’s just me. I would be afraid to touch this story for being labeled that.

The idea of a secret affair...

Or the idea that the older woman had been in love with the 19 year old for years...

Or the idea that the college girl has blackmailed the woman into sex...

Did you really say that? Do you know now that this is blatant pure as the driven snow racist? If you enjoy these stories you are a racist. If you write these stories you are a racist. Period, it's not twisting or spinning it's already there. Now that I've stated facts.

http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=407460

By your logic:

I read and enjoy murder mysteries novels - so I am a murderer.
Agatha Christie was a murderess.

Well that should simplify things for the police!

 

[Sean Renaud]

Not remotely the same.

 

[JMaxwell69]

Not remotely the same.

That is called a gratuitous assertion, if you want anyone to agree with you, you'll need more than a formal decree of what - I hate to break it to you - is your opinion.

Obviously, it is true that reading mysteries does not make one a murderer - because the act of murder defines the condition of being a murderer.

However, if we take refine the argument and say that those who read murder mysteries must be psychopaths who revel in the destruction of human life, then I think one has a more analogous argument to saying those who engage in writing or enjoy role-play or fantasy that involves racial slurs or racially-charged scenes are inherently racist.

 

[Sean Renaud]

I shouldn't have to be more thorough. People should be able to cess it out on their own. That said Murder mysteriers are almost always about catching murderers and bringing them to justice. Sure there is Dexter and I would debate that Dexter fans at least fantacise about killing someone and getting away with it. But if you want to say they just want a look at the otherside fine. Other than murder mysteries are about catching and punishing murderers, not about glorifying murder. 24 isn't/wasn't about torture (no matter much Jack does it) it was about defending America from terrorist and a man who was willing to do whatever it took to keep the world safe.

This story however is about glorifying racism and treating people as inferior by the color of their skin. You could at least pretend like there was a moral of this being wrong if the white girl is punished at the end of the tale but she won't be. Why? Because she's not wrong within the context of this story.

Besides the bottom line is that if you would think to notice that someone is a different race instead of us all being human you're already racist. Beyond that we're just setting the goal posts for what is bad or not bad.

 

[LaRocha]

I shouldn't have to be more thorough. People should be able to cess it out on their own. That said Murder mysteriers are almost always about catching murderers and bringing them to justice. Sure there is Dexter and I would debate that Dexter fans at least fantacise about killing someone and getting away with it. But if you want to say they just want a look at the otherside fine. Other than murder mysteries are about catching and punishing murderers, not about glorifying murder. 24 isn't/wasn't about torture (no matter much Jack does it) it was about defending America from terrorist and a man who was willing to do whatever it took to keep the world safe.

This story however is about glorifying racism and treating people as inferior by the color of their skin. You could at least pretend like there was a moral of this being wrong if the white girl is punished at the end of the tale but she won't be. Why? Because she's not wrong within the context of this story.

Besides the bottom line is that if you would think to notice that someone is a different race instead of us all being human you're already racist. Beyond that we're just setting the goal posts for what is bad or not bad.

You're a tool.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... Besides the bottom line is that if you would think to notice that someone is a different race instead of us all being human you're already racist. Beyond that we're just setting the goal posts for what is bad or not bad.

When I meet someone I notice many things about them, skin colour being one, but also hair colour (and I unashamedly prefer red heads), age (and I unashamedly prefer young people in their late teens/early twenties), sex (and I unashamedly prefer females), third finger of the left hand (and I unashamedly prefer married), height (and I unashamedly prefer them shorter than I), intelligence (and I unashamedly prefer clever ones), weight (and I unashamedly prefer lissom figures), and other attributes.

Why is my preference for people of my own race so bad, when compared with my sexism, ageism, heightism, fatism, intellectual snobbery, and penchant for adultery? Believe me a Japanese Sumo wrestler with an IQ of less than 100 is not my idea of someone with whom I would want to spend my free time.