too clever for my own good?

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[Stella_Omega]

read this, please:

She as equally starved, her kisses were sex, not merely foreplay, but a mouth fucking of tongues, two pussies capable of tasting each other each with a prehensile clit... mmmmm the wetness, the swallowing, the softness!


then this:

Your story is quite good. But, you need to understand the definition of the
words you roll off your fingertips. A clit is not and cannot be prehensile. A
monkey's tail is prehensile meaning that it can be used to cling to and hang
onto something. This is a minor flaw. The way you are weaving your description with powerful words give the impression that you are a wordsmith. However, the same people who will appreciate that will also know the word 'prehensile'.

Do you know the word? Do you think that I know the word?

I am NOT a "wordsmith"...but I do know monkeys!!

yes, too damn clever!
You're talking about the tongues- yes, Tongues are somewhat clitoral when you're kissing, and they are certainly sort of prehensile...
It's a very sexy passage, and i wish I'd thought of it.

People read funny, that's all.

 

[Guest]

fie!
quit your bitchin and get back to work.
*grin*
you know we love you.

 

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[R. Richard]

Prehensile can mean to grasp, especially by wrapping around [like a monkey's tail]. However, prehensile can also mean greddy and graspimg. The latter definition seens to work well with what you have written.

 

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[cloudy]

well... the tongues were meant to be Clit-like in one sense;
The mouthes are pussy-like and the tongues are the clits (yes, I know clits aree NOT anchored at the base of the pussy..and most pussies have no teeth)
..and prehensile in another...as tongues basically ARE

best of both worlds.


too esoteric?

I got it.

yep...they're being stupidheads.

 

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[BlackShanglan]

Your story is quite good. But, you need to understand the definition of the
words you roll off your fingertips. A clit is not and cannot be prehensile. A
monkey's tail is prehensile meaning that it can be used to cling to and hang
onto something. This is a minor flaw. The way you are weaving your description with powerful words give the impression that you are a wordsmith. However, the same people who will appreciate that will also know the word 'prehensile'.

Pathetic fallacy? And here I thought John Ruskin had been dead for a hundred years.

 

[Samandiriel]

I'm too sexy for my hat....whatcha think about that?

 

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[Honey123]

I'm too sexy for my hat....whatcha think about that?

No I can't get that song out of my head.


DG - I read what you wrote and I thought it was fine as stated. Just curious, was it two girls kissing??

 

[minsue]

Most of us that recognize both the word prehensile and your ability as a wordsmith also recognize that not everything in literature is to be taken absolutely literally.

Keep that poor soul out of the poetry sections.....

 

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[minsue]

OOPS! that was just were I sent HIM!

keep an eye out....Mr. Anonymous

Much obliged.