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moondoggie

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:) Hi new to this, but love the comments and photos of amber.

Thought I would send this out:

I lay alone,
in the sultry summer night.
I close my eyes,
and we are together once again.
Walking hand in hand,
along a moon lit beach of white sand.
I whisper in your ear,
and your laughter fills the air.
We stop and reach out,
to embrace each other tenderly.
My lips seek your,
and then the softness of your neck.
Slightly coolis the air,
as our heated flesh is exposed.
Yet we are warmed,
as I gently lower you to the sand.
Wanting time to cease,
I continue to kiss and caress you.
As the moment arrives,
and we finally come together.
Matching their rythm,
our hearts are filled with passion.
I can not let you go,
as we slowly come to rest.
I open my eyes,
and I am alone again.
Yet my soul realizes,
that the passion is real that we shared.


Hope you like:rolleyes:
 
Moondoggie

Wow I am in awe. That was such an incredibly erotic and sensual poem. So much emotion within. I am deeply flattered you took the time to write that. You have made my weekend. I hope to see more of you around and welcome to Lit.

I absolutely love it, god thank you so much.

Love,
Amber:heart:
 
Damn

Damn my hats off to you. Nice poem. Shit why didn't I think of that. You have talent Brother.

:devil: HCFF
 
thanks HCFF

One more - hey I don't have a camera so I have to show my feelings for everyone somehow;)

In the dark of the night,
with a gentle rain falling,
let it lull your mind,
and free your soul.

With each drop of rain,
let your troubles go,
and open your heart,
to wash away your pain.

As the breeze touches your face,
dream of loves past,
yet look to the future,
and imagine the best.

Let the mood touch your mind,
and clear the cobwebs,
to reach those dreams,
of happiness,
love,
and peace.

It's the weekend everyone, if its raining (like here),
snuggle with someone special,

and forget the world for just a few moment.

Love and peace, everyone
 
I would like to congratulate you on a job well done. The talent found on these threads is , or at least used to be, so unexpected. Now I am no longer shocked, although I remain in awe of such gifts.

I have a question. I just finished watching Gidget Goes to Rome on AMC and was wondering if there is any connection to your choice of names and the character within that film.....
 
moondoggie

Another lovely poem, lucky is the woman that inspired you to write that one as well

/xo/A
 
Post 'em ...

Those are great, moondoggie! Get your butt over to the poetry side of this site and post them! They are alway looking for fresh material and those are worthy of posting!
 
thanks bully, you're close to the target, grew up on an island and spent my life on the beach, and in the water.

And perhaps I will see the poetry side, Miltone, and let them know you sent me.;)
 
a thought pervoking poem

Just made this up, let me know your answer.

While walking along,
a mountain pass,
I happened upon an elderly man.

In need of rest,
I took a seat,
upon the grass beside him.

I asked of him,
his reason for,
a look that was so grim.

With a far off glare,
he asked a question,
but told me to think deeply.

Whether the sweet Amber of day,
or the silky Mystical night,
which would I truly desire?

With the sun setting,
and the rising moon,
I thought deeply of each delight.

Time stood still,
me and the old man,
the Amber sun and the Mystical moon.

Finally I spoke,
from deep with in,
the answer of my true desire.

Both I said,
I could not bare,
the loss of either one's treasures.

He smiled,
then rose,
and walked away.

Leaving me,

my sweet Amber sun,

and my silky Mystical moon.


Love you ladies, what would Lit be without you.:rose: :rose:
 
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Moondoggie

You take my breath away...I could read your words for hours..it is amazing how you caught the essence of both of us...we always says Mysti is the mysterious queen of the night and i am the golden angel.

I wish I could express how much you taking the time to write about me, and now my sis who I love dearly, means to me. I hope I can find a way to repay you for such a precious gift...I will try to write a poem now that I am inspired but don't get your hopes up on it being good.

:heart: Amber :heart:
 
Thank you ever so much Moon I am almost in tears thank you. As my sweet sis has said you have captured both of us very souly. Words are hard to come right now but I think you are one of the sweetest men I have met here. I love your poems and your mind. Bless y ou dear man and again my deepest thanks.
 
dirty limericks

Sorry, but Amber has gotten me into a playful mood, and it reminded me of these limericks I once wrote. (Anyone who has some please post them too.)


There once was a girl from St. Ive,
Who loved to suck cock for a high,
One night while being bold,
She couldn't take the full load,
And so she got sperm in her eye.


(In honor of Super Bowl Sunday. Since I'm a Denver fan, and Oakland is our arch rival, I wrote this about one of their past QB.)

There once was a woman from Nantucket,
Who wanted the dick of Jim Pluncket,
Well, he dropped his pants,
And she laughed and danced,
And said if I was a teacher I'ld flunk it.


Go Pats.
:cool:
 
as promised from ...12 steps....

Sittng by the water's edge,
the waves gently lapping the shore.
The early moring breeze,
causes the moon's reflection to waver.

We lay embraced together,
basking in the warm glow of the dying fire.
Our lips part from kissing,
and still have the taste of champange.

The sun's first rays,
reach out to greet the world.
And your eyes sparkle,
with the beginning of a new day.

For the moment,
time stops all that's around us.
And we are lost,
in each other and the feelings of our desires.


<For those who don't know, Amber has beautiful, soulful eyes. Check out some of her posts.>
:rose: :heart:
 
awe

Love the limericks and yes go Patriots! and thank you for the beautiful poem again...you never stop amazing me

/xo/A
 
Part I

Sunlight


Sunlight -
Entering my room,
moving across the floor,
reaching my sleeping form.

Rays-
Caressing my face,
licking my chest,
kissing my stomach.

Warmth-
Stirring my flesh,
embrassing my body,
taking my desire.

Sunlight-
Opening my eyes,
welcoming to a new day.

:heart: :rose:
 
moon

Again such a beautiful work....I envy you but we are so blessed that you share with us.

/xo/:heart: A
 
picture

Picture of Poet at work.

(okay I was uncomfortable with my photo, so I thought this one was better.)
 
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doggie

The picture came out great looking forward to more

/xo/A
 
My heart is swept away,
by images of your beauty.
My lips seek out the pleasure,
of your moist, tender lips.
My body yearns for a touch,
of your soft, warm embrace.
My soul weeps another tear,
each moment I am without you.

For no matter how deep my desire for you runs -

My being will not be whole,
until the day we are together.
 
Part II

Mystery of the Night Moon

Moving with the darkness,
towards it's unsuspecting prey.
It's silky beams caressing,
move along my limbs.
Holding me in rapture,
kissing me in play.
Taking in my desire,
teasing with it's essence.
The universe expanding,
as it takes all my passion.
Watching over it's lover,
while fading into darkness.
 
I like it very much thank you for thinking of me again moon. You have a wonderful talent and your words bring images to my mind. I wait with baited breath your next work.
 
Blue Day

Sorry gang, feeling a little blue today. Must be the weather, and I could not sleep last night because I could not warm up.

I hope to get inspired later and add more tributes to my ladies fair, but for now please bear with me.


Sunshine, golden, on the grass,
yet it remains a deep dark green.
Wind, gentle, on the face,
which bends and sways the grass.

Walking, slowly, forms a path,
collapsing leaving the faintest trace.
Bees, humming, near honeysuckle,
lull the mind to ease.

Air, warm, surrounding the body,
rejuvenates the tired soul.
Birds, gliding, with such ease,
moving as though they are made of air.

Laying, restful, looking towards the sky,
moving past all imagination.
Clouds, peacefully, cross with the slightest motion,
allowing time to stop.
 
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