To much sex ?

[Beatnic_jazzman]

I've just had a backhanded compliment;

This message contains feedback for: Beatnic_jazzman About the submission: Sybian Engineer 10 This feedback was sent by: Anonymous

Title:

Unusual but interesting storyline

Comments:

This started out as an off the wall but interesting story that quickly devolved into chapter after chapter of never ending sex that soon became boring. Your talent, which appears to be much better than the average here, could have been better spent developing the plot.

I look forward to reading more of your writings.

You'd have to read the story to understand but it's a story about sex. It leaves me mute and bemused.

BJ

 

[sr71plt]

Well, yes, there are folks here (even on the forum, it seems), who don't want to give allowances that this is a porn site. It's not enough for them that tamer works emphasizing plot and character development are tolerated on this site; they don't want to tolerate full-out sex works here even though this is a porn site. They have some sort of trouble sharing the site with those it was meant for.

 

[bronzeage]

I've just had a backhanded compliment;



You'd have to read the story to understand but it's a story about sex. It leaves me mute and bemused.

BJ

At least they took the time to comment.

What anonymous means to say is the lube was spent before he was.

 

[PennLady]

At least they took the time to comment.

What anonymous means to say is the lube was spent before he was.

Hahahahha. That's a great way to look at it.

I've gotten comments, too, that readers have skipped the sex in my stories to get to the plot, and I take it as a compliment. What good is it to do otherwise?