To Claim the City-Input please

[The_Darker_Side]

"Part 1"
"Part 2"

They are the links

Two encouraging comments so far(thank you to you both ;D) and I was wondering if I could get some more before I start the next couple of parts. I have the next chapter done already I can still polish it if I have some input

This is my first erotic story -ever-, so, ya ^.^

Please and thank you

 

[LadyShade]

• Your first? What a lie.
  
  -cough-Rashia-cough- <3
  
  You already know where I stand regarding the story. =3
  

 

[The_Darker_Side]

Stalker -_- *licks* XD <3

Fair enough, you have a point there, Miss Shade

 

[The_Darker_Side]

Part 3

Part 3 is up and I would love some feed back on it! Espcially the last chapter of it, you'll see what I mean when you read it ;D