Tits - my first poem on Literotica

[agreatstoryteller]

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[WickedEve]

Good tit poem!

 

[ghost_girl]

Good morning,

I've written a few stories for Lit and now have an erotic poem:

http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=257223


Let me know what you think

B

hi there!!

I really enjoyed your poem. At first I thought the layout was chaotic, but after reading, I realize the layout is virtually perfect for the content. well done, maybe a some minor mods, but I cant wait to read more of your work..


welcome to Lit

xoxox


g_g

 

[My Erotic Trail]

a nicely told tale <grin..

Tits
by agreatstoryteller ©

But I always wear a bra
you say
indignant knuckles on bare hips
where just now my fingers had dimpled your skin

The shower fog curls across the ceiling escaping to here where I watch you dress.

Soap scented steam collides with sex-smelling chaotic sheets

I'm not going out braless
Posturing, pouting, pulling on panties

Is watching you put your clothes on better than watching you take them off?

At dinner, the cafe, crowded, casual, cacophonous

Why are you smiling?
You're still on my fingers, I say.

I don't tell you about the flushed skin splotched across your sternum
and there
lower
evidence of an overenthusiastic mouth.

The things I'm learning about your body.

You know, though, that I chose this spot
this far table
and you know that
I insisted your coat come off at the door
so you could show these people

Your red, tight, v-neck, t-shirt

Your
tits.