titles and asides that make you smile

[butters]

Annie got me thinking, and here's the thread for it - titles you love/loathe/would love to use someday and also the asides poets use when editing.


a title i would love to write around one day:

"Yes, but you have gum stuck on your shoe"

 

[greenmountaineer]

"A Kleenex for your Head," which is the title of a poem I'm currently working on and which, based only on the title, would perhaps bring a laugh, and a sardonic one at that, to babyboomers who went to parochial school.

 

[butters]

i'll look forward to reading it

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I've often had a giggle about the editing reasons I often like to pop in an aside and wonder if anyone notices!

 

[Epmd607]

Purloined Coins Fell Softly From Her Loins

 

[UnderYourSpell]

facetiously wonders if she was picking up the coins with her ......

 

[butters]

I've often had a giggle about the editing reasons I often like to pop in an aside and wonder if anyone notices!

i always read 'em

Purloined Coins Fell Softly From Her Loins

fab-u-lous!

facetiously wonders if she was picking up the coins with her ......

...purse???

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Castrating Cucumbers

 

[nerk]

The Bottom Fell Out (of my six pack)

 

[UnderYourSpell]

I used to have a handle on the world but it broke off

 

[UnderYourSpell]

Yesterday A Working Nurse Irrigated Nigel's Gonads

how about a challenge giving the title of the poem to be written?

oh yes this does spell Yawning I nicked it off another thread well not knicked it exactly because I posted it!