I realize I haven't contributed all that much to Chyoo but I have read a great deal of the stories and have come to the conclusion that while MOST of the posts are quite good, there are more then a few authors that don't take the time to make a thread coherent at the very least.
Here are some things everyone should do before submitting a thread:
-Spellcheck is very important because it makes the writing seem more professional.
-Re-read your work so that at the very least the sentences are coherent, for example, "she tied chain to wall." things like this are painful to read and actually detract from the readers enjoyment of reading.
-At the very least capitalize when needed and put periods at the end of sentences.
-Don't post single sentences. I realize that not everyone can post 500-1000 or more words every single post but one senence threads are absolutely pointless and not worth writing in the first place.
-Try for continuity and accuracy in your writing.
Remember that its better to post 1 good threat then 100 terrible ones.
Here are some things everyone should do before submitting a thread:
-Spellcheck is very important because it makes the writing seem more professional.
-Re-read your work so that at the very least the sentences are coherent, for example, "she tied chain to wall." things like this are painful to read and actually detract from the readers enjoyment of reading.
-At the very least capitalize when needed and put periods at the end of sentences.
-Don't post single sentences. I realize that not everyone can post 500-1000 or more words every single post but one senence threads are absolutely pointless and not worth writing in the first place.
-Try for continuity and accuracy in your writing.
Remember that its better to post 1 good threat then 100 terrible ones.