Time for some BDSM rhyme

[~*sunkyssed_kym*~]

Time for some BDSM rhyme....OR How do I love thee, let me count the flays*

Greetings all. Yes, I know I don't post over here much, in fact hardly atall since last summer; but that's another story.
Anyway, I assure you that I am a submissive and whilst I have MY-Sir; He's in England and I'm here in the states.
Anyway... I digress. The reason for this thread is to bring out the creative juices (pardon the pun) and express BDSM in verse.
Creating rhyme is a favourite pastime of mine and although it is about BDSM, it need not be serious. Have some fun, let go and enjoy.
So, without further ado here's my rhyme.

He has a way of making me all weak in the knees
A look is all that's needed to bring out the sub in me
This power that He has over me is so very compelling
I've never had this feeling and there's none I can be telling
The lifestyle that He has me in
Many would cry its full of sin!
But I care not what other's say
Its at BDSM that I love to play
But not with just any ol' Sir
Tis with Him only, I must concur
I greatly look forward to that day when we are together
Wearing His cuffs daily, feeling my wrists bound with leather
ARGH!! The torment of separation at times drives me quite mad!
Please forgive this wingeing of mine, I know its awfully sad.
Now that I've gone and written my thoughts into rhyme
I'm hoping that others will contribute their verse to mine!

-kym- Climbing off of my cross now so that someone else can use the wood


*Title ammeded due to inspiration during my bike ride

 

[~*sunkyssed_kym*~]

I must say that I'm really bummed about the lack of BDSM rhyme
I thought surely the folks here with this would have a great time
I suppose there is too much controversy going on about this new board
All this hollerin and pointing of fingers has made for too much discord
Tis my thought that we should just let sleeping dogs lay
Get on with life and have some fun with BDSM play
I know that there are those who want nothing to do with the likes of me
Sorry but I'm here and going to stay, I think its called speech that is free
I've played on the BDSM board in days gone past
Just couldn't take the bickering that always seemed to last
So I ask my fellow BDSMers and Litsters too
Can't we just get along and end this silly feud?

-kym- There are much greater things in life to be passionate about!

 

[Debbie]

One of mine.

(Written under the name Debonaire)


Submit to Mistress


Temptation demands your attention
You say I tease, an erotic sensation
Standing in a confident sexy pose
Dressed in latex from neck to toes

Your first lesson is to be humility
Your second, to Mistress; loyalty
You wait for my command to you
"Kneel new slave for your Debut"


You kneel before me, too confidently
Then you touch, to try to please me
I strike you for your disrespect
You are mine, a lowly sex object

You lower your slave head in shame
Knowing that you are wrong, to blame
You wait to be punished by Mistress
I strike you, hard, to you a caress

My strap across your naked skin
Leaving red marks, causing chagrin
Your body trembles as the blows fall
Excitement builds, you are in thrall

Your body is mine, to do as I see fit
To punish or reward as you submit
Now you will be humble and obey
Thank you Mistress, quietly you say

 

[~*sunkyssed_kym*~]

One of mine.

(Written under the name Debonaire)


Submit to Mistress


Temptation demands your attention
You say I tease, an erotic sensation
Standing in a confident sexy pose
Dressed in latex from neck to toes

Your first lesson is to be humility
Your second, to Mistress; loyalty
You wait for my command to you
"Kneel new slave for your Debut"


You kneel before me, too confidently
Then you touch, to try to please me
I strike you for your disrespect
You are mine, a lowly sex object

You lower your slave head in shame
Knowing that you are wrong, to blame
You wait to be punished by Mistress
I strike you, hard, to you a caress

My strap across your naked skin
Leaving red marks, causing chagrin
Your body trembles as the blows fall
Excitement builds, you are in thrall

Your body is mine, to do as I see fit
To punish or reward as you submit
Now you will be humble and obey
Thank you Mistress, quietly you say

My my Debbie, I'm very impressed!
Such power in verse, makes mine look a mess
I simply ramble with what's in my mind
Not really caring about the words that I find
But YOU are a much different matter
You make me look like the Mad Hatter!
Your verse is well thought and smoothly flows
Building in strength the longer it goes
I'm humbled by your post to say the very least
I thank you Debbie, your rhyme has been a visual feast


-kym- Enjoying the visual banquet