Audrey DA Hottie
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- Jun 24, 2005
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Everyone,
thx a ton for all the awesome feedback mailed to me for my first 2 stories: The Making of a Flower 1 and The Making of a Flower 2. I know I have a lot of scope for improvement. Please keep the feedback coming in and I promise to get better
1) http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=263098
2) http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=267625
luv
Audrey
thx a ton for all the awesome feedback mailed to me for my first 2 stories: The Making of a Flower 1 and The Making of a Flower 2. I know I have a lot of scope for improvement. Please keep the feedback coming in and I promise to get better
1) http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=263098
2) http://english.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=267625
luv
Audrey
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