Three girls one guy on a cruise

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A guy, his girlfriend and her two best friends

My girlfriend and I have always had a fantasy of going on a cruise with my her two best friends and having sex with them throughout the week. It wouldn't be a foursome every time but getting to experience different combinations of the three ladies. We've discussed the premise of the story but need help with the actually story.
Here are the characters in ourstory:
David - 5'10 guy, blonde hair, green eyes,in good shape but not very muscular
Erin - David's girlfriend, 5'3 gal, blue eyes, brunette hair, 34B breasts, shaves most of her bikini area (leaves a landing strip), in good shape
Lauren - One of Erin's best friends, 5'6", brown eyes, brunette hair, 32B breasts, just shaves the bottom part of her bikini area and bikini line, taller and a little skinnier than Erin. Lauren is also a virgin, she hasn't done anything more than oral sex with a guy.
Danielle - Erin's other best friend and one of David's friends since HS. She's 5'5", bleach blonde hair, green eyes, 36D breasts, completely shaved bikini area, in fairly good shape herself.

The story begins by the 4 of them checking into their cabin on the cruise ship. They'll be sharing the room as it has two queen beds. As they begin change outfits Lauren and Danielle are shy and not changing in front of David. Finally, after a while
Erin insists that she is fine with them changing in front of him. Lauren and Danielle are fine with this as it will make getting ready easier and less time consuming. Later that night, after a few drinks, Erin goes a little further and says that she doesn't mind sharing David with Lauren and Danielle. This makes Lauren a little nervous as she never slept with a guy before. However, over the next couple days the four of them end up sleeping with each other and it's a great time.
 
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Sounds like a fun-filled stroker, the kind guys like. Hint: do NOT start the story with a data dump outlining the players. Work their descriptions into the flow of the narrative. And you get to choose a POV. Is the tale told by one of the four, or is it 3rd-person omniscient, or what? It may be tempting to rotate between each player's POV: David narrates a short chapter; Erin gives her take on things; then Lauren; then Danielle; and back to David, etc. Resist that temptation!

Are any of the girls bi? With Lauren being a PIV virgin, you could work in first-fuck and first-time-lez dynamics for drama. Did any of the girls bring toys? Can we expect triple-penetrations via strap-ons? Do they make so much noise that passengers in adjacent cabins complain?
 
Thanks, Hypoxia.
I like the idea of it being told in third person.

Do you have any suggestions on working in first fuck with Lauren into the story?

I'm a more business minded person, not the super creative type.
 
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