Thoughts?

[Ember_on_ice]

Here's my second story to be posted on Lit: http://www.literotica.com/s/faire-play-ch-02

I'd love any feedback from readers, whether you liked it or would make changes. Also, there will be more in this series, since I keep having ideas about what I'd like to have happen at one of these Faires, so if there's something you'd like to read about, do send along your wishes. I'll see what I can do.
-Em

 

[Ember_on_ice]

<pout>

Did nobody enjoy my new story? Maybe I'm too impatient, but I was hoping for some instant gratification...

 

[RedButterflySlut]

That was perhaps the classiest blowjob I have ever read.

Seriously. It was like how a fair princess would describe giving fellatio. I approve, I enjoy your writing style- classy words while being deliciously dirty.

Also, you make me wish it was Ren Fair season already. I love going to them, so much fun! Mm, turkey legs.

 

[ultach]

Hi Ember,

It's not really the kind of story I enjoy, but it's well written. And it's funny, which is always a bonus! My favourite line: "My own juices were pooling on the floor between my knees, but my skirts fell around me and concealed the puddle."

Cheers,

Ultach