Thoughts on Literotica

[Mordikai]

I have just submitted the last part of my second story. It has been interesting watching the number of hits reduce but the star scores increase. I hope this is due to both finding my audience and an improvement in my storytelling.

Some thoughts; finding an editor for non-consensual is an impossibility, so I have to self edit.

There are people out there who give one star for no reason. I think it would discourage random one star bombers if anyone who gives 1 or 5 stars had to provide a comment explaining why. It might also reduce 5 star scoring but often 5 stars are as undeserved as 1. None of my work is that good or that bad!

Comments and feedback should be encouraged more. I like people to tell me what they think not just hit a star button.

I shall continue to publish as the feedback on this forum has helped me and I get a buzz from people enjoying reading my stories.

For those interested my chapter story can be found here:

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-devil-and-danni

 

[lovecraft68]

I think you're right that its difficult to find an editor for non con (incest is not always easy either)

But if you're looking through the VE list an editor period is not easy

Try looking here. You can start a thread for an editor and also look at the monthly list of editors many list what they will won't edit.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9

 

[elfin_odalisque]

mordikai

I believe I read a while ago that Lit does sweeps to eliminate low votes not only on contest entries but '1' votes on ordinary postings. sr might know more.

Still, readers should be free to express their opinions. This isn't North Korea.

Roll with the punches and enjoy the site.

 

[Mordikai]

mordikai

I believe I read a while ago that Lit does sweeps to eliminate low votes not only on contest entries but '1' votes on ordinary postings. sr might know more.

Still, readers should be free to express their opinions. This isn't North Korea.

Roll with the punches and enjoy the site.

Hi I'm happy to roll with them, no problem. I certainly don't agree with wiping out one star votes. That's why I thought of getting people to say why it's crap or why it's genius. They might just think and feedback.

 

[Mordikai]

I think you're right that its difficult to find an editor for non con (incest is not always easy either)

But if you're looking through the VE list an editor period is not easy

Try looking here. You can start a thread for an editor and also look at the monthly list of editors many list what they will won't edit.

http://forum.literotica.com/forumdisplay.php?f=9

Thank you, yes I've tried there with no joy . I'm tempted to write a noncon incest bestiality story to attract editors

 

[lovecraft68]

Thank you, yes I've tried there with no joy . I'm tempted to write a noncon incest bestiality story to attract editors

well beastie isn't allowed.

Try....Non con incest with a bi sexual male and toss in some femdom and people will run screaming

 

[JAMESBJOHNSON]

well beastie isn't allowed.

Try....Non con incest with a bi sexual male and toss in some femdom and people will run screaming

Reminds me of Pilots official bio.

 

[robertreams]

yes, you need an editor, a couple errors, not too many. A suggestion: Perhaps you could use more archaic language, give more the flavor of an ancient soul. One easy example use" frightened" or "terrified" instead of "scared".

"In the abyss, reclining on my fiery throne, surrounded by my evil minions, I knew I would savor the task at hand, choosing today's miserable human soul. Yes, to my benefit, all humans are tempted when prayers fail, offer their souls to me for a favour, one that 'He Up There' won't do. (an ellipse, . . .dot space, dot space, dot space, is used for interrupted speech or an excerpted quote, not for a pause in speech, for which you should use a comma.) People ask for many things from small sums of money to multiple murders. And I am all too willing to oblige. At a price." (suggesting a slightly different 'tone'. I would use a thesaurus to find even more arcane words, give the whole thing a more devilish feeling)

 

[Mordikai]

Robert.... you're hired! !