wishfulthinking
Misbehaving
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Hi there, this is part of a story I'm working on, and would appreciate lots of pointers. It is my first forray into sci-fi/fantasy category, and at the moment feel as though I'm falling into all the usual cliches (not believable etc). I've posted the first part below.
Background: I read an except from one of Jaid Black's stories, and have drawn on her idea of the use of venomous vines to break in new slaves, modified it beyond all recognition so that Ms Black cannot be blamed for my lame attempt. In the opening I will mention that it is a tribute to her.
Background: I read an except from one of Jaid Black's stories, and have drawn on her idea of the use of venomous vines to break in new slaves, modified it beyond all recognition so that Ms Black cannot be blamed for my lame attempt. In the opening I will mention that it is a tribute to her.
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