Third submission -- your feedback much appreciated

Baudie

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This is my third attempt, but in a different category than the first two. Overall I think I did a better job on this one, but I have a clear bias. ;)

Your constructive critique of "Road to Nowhere" in the Romance section will be much appreciated.

Road to Nowhere - Busy businesswoman is stranded on a country road

Previous Stories:
Car Wash - He dared her, and no way was she going to back down.
Deer Camp - A hunting season widow takes revenge... or does she?
 
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