The World is always evil

[DevilPlay]

Dear all, I am a new writer although been reading for almost a year now.
I like to contribute a sexual roleplay idea and just wonder if it works. It is pretty general and the story may lead to any direction but the idea of tricking others and showing them how to do evil sound kinky. Imagine the earthling has even forgotten about oral sex, not to mention anal. Shy to even undress unless married.

Here goes the story:

The world has turned away from evil. Churches, temples are popping out everywhere and people begin to leave peacefully. No war, no fighting , no drugs.

The Devil is very angry. He sent for his loyal servants the heartless couple and give them instructions "The world has turned against me. I am loosing my power. Go Attan, break the heart of every good woman you find. Use them. Evandar, go seduce every young man and teach them violence. Show them sex is not only mend for babies."

Attan and Evandar turns into human and visited the earth. They kiss each other good bye and set out with their new mission.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Hi there. If you're looking to write up a role play story, you may wish to check out this board: Sexual Role Playing!

Welcome to Lit!

 

[VoyageToBeyond]

the world turns to peace and people start going to church and temple? seems contradictory - i was always under the impressions churches/temples and their associated institutions of religion were the transmitters of evil and the supporters of war!

i must say, it is a different type of story, but why is sex seen as evil? are wars and open sexuality associated? it seems there are several underlying assumptions in the storyline that need to be questioned or engaged at some level.

makes one think a bit though....

 

[emap]

Religion causes wars when there are different religions. It is used as an excuse when somebody wants more land.

It is simple to get rid of wars and have religion, there is one religion and one country. Course there is still a problem, cutting it down to one religion and one country, you run into a seperate problem, people from one area will look down on people from a different area.

So basically the only way to get a story like this to work is you get a really small area, i'm talking maybe one city block in size. Which actually is cutting it large, most people tend to look down on somebody from a different street. Gangs in Los Angeles being a big old case in point, one street gets a gang to 'protect' that street, the streets on either side get a gang if they didn't already. Even the peaceful areas of a city see the same thing, wrong side of the tracks has been a problem for people sinc ethere were tracks.

Course if your talking not exactly humans no problem, or there is something else they can hate instead of each other. Invading aliens are a good one, or the idea that there are aliens out there planning on invading, problem being keeping people believing in said aliens that are planning on but haven't yet.

 

[LadynStFreknBed]

Here's the first chapter based on this idea:

Devil's Rebellion Ch. 01

I think I side-stepped some of the concerns by explaining how and why the "turn from evil" happened. Of course, there is a degree of suspension of disbelief required, as with most nonhuman stories.

More chapters will be coming soon!
-Sheila

 

[blikst]

Here's the first chapter based on this idea:

Devil's Rebellion Ch. 01

I think I side-stepped some of the concerns by explaining how and why the "turn from evil" happened. Of course, there is a degree of suspension of disbelief required, as with most nonhuman stories.

More chapters will be coming soon!
-Sheila

I like the beginning, it has potential.

I might make an atempt as well.

 

[DevilPlay]

Thanks sis, you did a good job. The devils are so lusty. We are waiting for the seduction part now ! ha ha ha ha.......

Tell me if you need any assistance.

Danny