N Nigel Debonnaire Virgin Joined Sep 23, 2005 Posts 12 Oct 15, 2006 #1 none xxxxx Last edited: Nov 12, 2006
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S snooper 8-))? Joined May 6, 2003 Posts 3,364 Oct 16, 2006 #4 Nigel Debonnaire said: ... I’m open to constructive criticism about mistakes in detail or inconsistencies in the characters’ behavior in these stories, ... I’m brave enough to put the stories in England although I’ve never been blessed with treading that hallowed soil. Click to expand... Your conversations are mnearly pure US. For example in The Quilting Ladies you have three ladies, all in their sixties greeting the arrival of the Vicar with: "Hiya, Vicar. How's it going?" "Hello, Vic." "Father Alfred, so good to see you." The last of the three sounds like a mature English lady, while the first two sound like characters out of "Friends".
Nigel Debonnaire said: ... I’m open to constructive criticism about mistakes in detail or inconsistencies in the characters’ behavior in these stories, ... I’m brave enough to put the stories in England although I’ve never been blessed with treading that hallowed soil. Click to expand... Your conversations are mnearly pure US. For example in The Quilting Ladies you have three ladies, all in their sixties greeting the arrival of the Vicar with: "Hiya, Vicar. How's it going?" "Hello, Vic." "Father Alfred, so good to see you." The last of the three sounds like a mature English lady, while the first two sound like characters out of "Friends".
N Nigel Debonnaire Virgin Joined Sep 23, 2005 Posts 12 Oct 16, 2006 #5 none 3 xxxxx Last edited: Nov 12, 2006
