The Vanished 1 and 2

[Merelan]

Holy mother. What a talented author. The imagery has you spellbound from the first line to the last. Even those not "into" this scene will admit you are a talented wordmaster. Well worth the wait for the second part. Please tell us there is more.

 

[catlover]

Merelan, you excite us with what you say,but please give us the url so we can switch without a lot of looking

 

[Silverlily]

You hit the nail on the head as usual, Merelan darling. Not my kind of story, pain does not get me off, but a fantastically written story nonetheless.

Anyone who does enjoy stories about pain and bondage really should take the time to read these two.

Sorry catlover, maybe this will help -
http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/authpages/817_auth.shtml

 

[Merelan]

Kitten to the rescue!! Sorry guys.

 

[Suzie Samuels]

Thank you so much

Hi, thank you so much for all your kind words. I am having fun writing it and it is a work in progress. Watch for more.
I love to here what you think of my stories.

 

[Silverlily]

BTW, part three is up now too. So far it is my favorite.

I love the way you wrote Geoff, as much as I want to hate him, I can't.

 

[Merelan]

I read it too. I agree with Kitten, I want to hate him, despise him, but, you find yourself drawn to him.

 

[Suzie Samuels]

More Coming

It may be a little while in coming but there is more coming and it is going to be good, if I do say so my self. So watch for it.

I am so pleased you are enjoying it.

 

[Merelan]

I have enjoyed all your stories but had to comment on this series. Take your time and we shall be here waiting. It is nice to know you value the quality over the quantity.

 

[Suzie Samuels]

Merelan, what a nice thing to say. I am working on it an will let you know when you can expect to find it posted here.



[Edited by Suzie Samuels on 11-05-2000 at 11:24 AM]

 

[KillerMuffin]

You are a good writer, there is no doubt about that. You were able to inspire strong emotions in me concerning your subject matter. Of course, I am not into this sort of thing, it sends me into a rage and I could barely stop myself from growling while I read it.

I won't be reading any of your stuff anymore, because I simply can't stomach the content. However, you are an excellent writer, you should definately keep it up.

 

[Suzie Samuels]

killer kitten

Hi, I understand how you feel beccause I have those same emotions towards other topics.

But I have written one called Was It Real and also known as Geoff's Love. There is no BDSM in at all. You may enjoy it to. I hope so.

You see when I started writing less than a year ago I had no intention of getting stuck in only one venue, but I seem to be able to write it well and there are not a lot of erotica that is BDSM and non consenual that has any real story to it.

I want to write lots of different things and only wish I had the time to devote to more of it. So just watch for my name, I guess.

I really do appreciate your feedback. Let me know what you think of Was It Real, will you?

Suzie

 

[Merelan]

No... no. Why? Damn it you change the story. make him come back. it isn't fair.
Suzy!!!!!!!!! Please, if I beg will you tell me you changed the ending? Please....

 

[Suzie Samuels]

Merelan, I think you liked my story, Was It Real. Or did you hate it?

I wrote it to see if I could do something different, did I succeed?
Suzie

 

[Merelan]

Of course I liked it. Incredible, but I hated/loved the ending. You know what I mean. Whew. I was crying my head off after that, and when I posted. Not just anyone can make me cry. It was so realistic. You felt the pleasure, and the pain.
Kudos and all kinds of granola bars to you darling.
A toast of sweet red wine to an incredible lady!!

 

[Suzie Samuels]

It made me cry too

When I was writing it, it made me cry too. I wasn't sure whether anyone would like it or not. Glad you did.

Don't forget to vote for my stories. LOL

 

[KillerMuffin]

I can't find it. Where is it?

 

[Merelan]

I went to one of the vanished stories and clicked on her name. There are all her stories. It is beautiful!

 

[Suzie Samuels]

Hi Killer,

Here is the url for Was It Real...

Let me know if you enjoy it, please.

http://www.literotica.com/storyxs/stories/wirowiad_r_817_i0.shtml

 

[Suzie Samuels]

Hopefully this will tide you over

Mama’s Boy
By Suzie Samuels
Copyright 2000


She turns the music up loud, knowing he'd be watching. He, the epitome of an aging mama's boy, watches from behind the dirty windows of his darkened house. She steps lively to the music. As the tempo picks up her arms pump, her knees step high, her legs kick in perfect time. She glistens with sweat. It thrills her to exercise nude in the privacy of her home. Her well-defined muscles rippling, her shaved pubes pout and wink. She gives purpose to his sad life. She catches movement, he is gone, satisfied – the tension in his balls lessened.
Tomorrow, they repeat their duet.

 

[KillerMuffin]

Interesting story.

 

[Suzie Samuels]

Watch for a new story

Hi there,

I just posted another story called He Made Her His Lady. Only a little control and it is consensual. I think you will enjoy it.

 

[KillerMuffin]

Cool. Check out Laurel's thread in the Author's Hangout board.

 

[Silverlily]

Was It Real? left me numb. Not bad numb, just overwhelmed. I'm sorry I can't be more specific, but words just aren't cutting it right now.

 

[Suzie Samuels]

Was It Real

Hi Kitten Eyes,

If you can ever put it into words, I would love to hear what your overwhelmed means.

I was a story meant to elicit different emotions. It was meant to be make us appreciate what we have for it can be taken so easily.

Thanks for writing.

Suzie