The Twist

[DevilPlay]

Adam and Eve were planning to get married and they had a wonderful sex life. She was a little dominant and they enjoy playing Dom/sub games where she plays the control part. He loves the idea of playing a young virgin boy being seduced by a senior matured woman and obediently do anything she wishes him to do in order to see her naked or fuck her if she allows.

She was telling her girlfriend Amanda about her hot husband and how she tied him to the bed, making him beg for a relief. She describes her favorite toys and how she keep him horny and hard.

Finally, she invited Amanda to join in for a threesome.

She plays her usual games and taught Amanda the trick of being a dom. She was excited but little does she suspect, Amanda begin to fall for Adam.

She dated him secretly and pampered him so much so that he begins to like being a dom himself. He enjoy doing what Eve had done to him and Amanda submit happily to him.

Adam gets reluctant to be whipped by Eve and he don't enjoy as before.

Eva soon found out that Adam and Amanda are seeing each other and she decides to win him back again. She will learn to submit to him and do better than Amanda.


Any comment?

Danny

 

[sunandshadow]

Hmm, not sure about that last part. Anyone who has enjoyed submitting would probably always want to do it once in a while, they wouldn't want to be an exclusive. If Eve was smart she'd refuse to dominate Adam until he was gagging for it, then make him realize what a profound and important experience submitting was to him. Amanda on the other hand, it doesn't make sense to have her learning to domme then turning into a worshipful sub - instead she should learn about subbing through Eve's domination, while Adam is jealous because as the domme Eve gets more direct contact with and control over Amanda, so it's Adam who is learning to dom.


Also, if you're going for a religious reference, maybe change the names around - domme first girl should be Lilith, sub second girl should be Eve.

 

[DevilPlay]

great idea. I agree with you. Probably that did not come across my mind and well, it was just another option.

Your idea sound good and I had not read any stories with such twist.

Danny.