Nightwaves
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Thanks to all who submitted comments and critiques in regard to The Toolshed, a story of a young virgin luring her older brother into the pleasures of sibling incest on a hot summer weekend while the parents are away.
The revised version has just been posted, with some corrections in punctuation, but also a few embellishments in the text for a less jarring flashback sequence. As it stands, it is what it is. Like many of you, I write these stories for myself, but hope you enjoy them, too.
Please give it a read:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=463416
The revised version has just been posted, with some corrections in punctuation, but also a few embellishments in the text for a less jarring flashback sequence. As it stands, it is what it is. Like many of you, I write these stories for myself, but hope you enjoy them, too.
Please give it a read:
http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=463416
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