The Tape

[NorthernExposure]

I posted a story here titled “The Tape” earlier this month and got a lot of great feedback, of course with the exception of a few anonymous people with unproductive things to say most of the 100+ comments were helpful. I don’t mind criticism as long as it’s productive. Most comments called for me to finish the story. I have always intended on adding more, and wanted to tackle the story in multiple parts.
The story is about a man that married his high school sweetheart. He has been married to her for 10 years and she always told him that he was the only man that she had ever been with. He finds a tape (actually a dvd) one day while cleaning and decided to see what was on it. To his shock it is a video of his conservative wife going wild with another man.
Some comments said “please don’t turn this into a cuckold story”.
I can go down two roads: part two can be about him “proving dominance in his marriage” or it can go down the cuckold road.
Thoughts????
If you have time please read part one, I love the feedback.
Thank you.

 

[JonathanBair]

I can see him starting to doubt her and check up on her while shes out.. That could cause some friction leading to fights and make-up sex.

 

[NorthernExposure]

I can see him starting to doubt her and check up on her while shes out.. That could cause some friction leading to fights and make-up sex.

Thank you! I’m thinking about keeping it to a power and control theme. Just trying to decide who will be I charge