The story behind the pez candy poem

[FieryRedhead30]

Well my cousins man who is over in Iraq with my man , said his honey was like a pez dispenser and all he had to do was push down to get a treat for her, or however he said it. So i told my cousin while i was at work that i would write a poem about it . Well sure enough while at work i got bored and wrote the little poem in less then 5 minutes, I hope u all enjoy it as much as i did writing it. Take care. Pez candy will never be the same again as Tess said LOL

 

[WickedEve]

Well my cousins man who is over in Iraq with my man , said his honey was like a pez dispenser and all he had to do was push down to get a treat for her, or however he said it. So i told my cousin while i was at work that i would write a poem about it . Well sure enough while at work i got bored and wrote the little poem in less then 5 minutes, I hope u all enjoy it as much as i did writing it. Take care. Pez candy will never be the same again as Tess said LOL

I read it. It's cute. Honestly, this kind of poetry doesn't appeal to me. But you did compare pez to a blowjob. That's creative. And that bit of originality made this poem stand out more than other cute poems.

 

[My Erotic Tale]

I read it. It's cute. Honestly, this kind of poetry doesn't appeal to me. But you did compare pez to a blowjob. That's creative. And that bit of originality made this poem stand out more than other cute poems.

you don't like this type poem or this type of play
and you the apple eve? hehehe

I loved it ...(~_*)

 

[WickedEve]

you don't like this type poem or this type of play
and you the apple eve? hehehe

I loved it ...(~_*)

I basically said that I don't like cutesy poems, but I think this poet was very creative, which took her cute poem up a notch. That's a compliment. I see potential here. I'd love for her to do more comparisons. I want to see how creative she can be.

Keep writing, girl!