EvetheSeducer
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This is a work of ficton based on the story of Adam and Eve depicted in the Bible. While based on the story of Original Sin, I will take artistic liscence. The postings will also be short. I have a thought process I am trying to follow. I had planned to write it alone, but if anyone is interested in taking the part of Adam or The Devil, please pm me.
Eve sat quietly in the lushness of the garden, her naked back resting against the rough bark of a tree. She watched the birds in the sky, the insects on the ground next to her. She watched everything, closely. Her interest in the working of all things was unknown to Adam, he saw only what he wanted to see.
He would come to her, lay her on the grass in the shade, mount her supple body, paw her tender flesh. His manhood would enter her, thrusting roughly into her womb. His grunts would drown out the natural noises of the garden, all would be still while he used her body.
Eve would lay silent, moving with him to ease her own needs. Her body would explode on his sometimes, making the act less vile to her. She thought of ways to make it better, more enjoyable for them both. She tried to show him, to guide him. He was unable, or unwilling to learn. She sometimes thought he believed her to be inferior. If he only knew.
Eve sat quietly in the lushness of the garden, her naked back resting against the rough bark of a tree. She watched the birds in the sky, the insects on the ground next to her. She watched everything, closely. Her interest in the working of all things was unknown to Adam, he saw only what he wanted to see.
He would come to her, lay her on the grass in the shade, mount her supple body, paw her tender flesh. His manhood would enter her, thrusting roughly into her womb. His grunts would drown out the natural noises of the garden, all would be still while he used her body.
Eve would lay silent, moving with him to ease her own needs. Her body would explode on his sometimes, making the act less vile to her. She thought of ways to make it better, more enjoyable for them both. She tried to show him, to guide him. He was unable, or unwilling to learn. She sometimes thought he believed her to be inferior. If he only knew.
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