daughter
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Hope I'm doing this correctly. I just read "The Scent of Love" by Thersites Vale.
Nice refrain. I think I would drop the "of" and simply say "smells like Stephanie". The construct better mirrors everyday speech. Like to see a rewrite on this, but I don't know how that is addressed on this forum.
Thanks for the read, poet.
Peace,
daughter
Nice refrain. I think I would drop the "of" and simply say "smells like Stephanie". The construct better mirrors everyday speech. Like to see a rewrite on this, but I don't know how that is addressed on this forum.
Thanks for the read, poet.
Peace,
daughter
