THE RESCUE (1 & 2) by High Peaks

[Guest]

SIMIAN'S BLURB:
When Mark rescues English heiress, Melissa, from the wreckage of her father's boat, he isn't expecting any kind of recompense for his bravery. But this Damsel in Distress intends to reward her Knight in Shining Armour with a gift greater than coins and jewels.

Peak's first Literotica story is an exciting slice of high adventure, involving deepsea diving, murderous hoodlums and comical sexual jousting.

RS

Story parts posted: 06/09 & 06/07

[This message has been edited by roger simian (edited 06-11-2000).]

 

[Guest]

Cool, Simian's Blurb (he's a professional writer ya'know)

Wow! Thanks Rog, It makes me want to read it again. I have reread it since it was posted and thought that I had over edited it. I thought it was too long. After it was posted I was surprised each part fit on one page and it seemed too short to build any characters, plot or tension.

Three strangers have emailed me to say they liked it.

How about next time giving a thumbs up or down icon if you like it or not?

Thanks for the plug.

HP

[This message has been edited by High Peaks (edited 06-10-2000).]

 

[Guest]

Thumbs up.

 

[Weird Harold]

^
| Roger, I think he means selecting this ICON when you post a review.

Originally posted by roger simian:
Thumbs up.

 

[Guest]

Uh-huh, Harold - I did realise that.

BTW - I'm only planning to "review" stuff I like, so you can just assume there's an upward pointing thumb next to any of my posts in here. If I remember to, I'll click that little box, too.

If I don't write about a story, doesn't necessarily mean I don't like it, though - probably just haven't read it.