the raping of an angel....

tmuyo

hitokiri battousai
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****there is no actual rape here...it is only figurative language****

ho hum, while i wait for the characters in my other stories show up i'll amuse myself with this one.this is open to one person to play the angel and one to play mephistopholes, my former master and now slave. (<---explanation is that to be the leader of hell, one must defeat the master: lucifer was defeated by satan and he by mephistopholes and he by myself, lucifer. yes, the same lucifer as before, but i have remained the champion of hell for the last few hundred years again. i take special pride in my project of industrializing the world. how else can i bring more sin to these people then by making them lazy and easily pleased).

i need someone to play the angel....i plan to corrupt her and take her for myself.

i play our lord lucifer in the depths of fiery hell.

i also need a mephistopholes.

while walking among the mortals (you didn't know i do that, hmm. shame on you. and you think GOD is the omnipotent one....) like i always do on my mission to bring enjoyment to the masses at only the cost of a small piece of their soul, i come upon one who is so pure. her soul has nothing corrupted at all. she doesn't even have any original sin...but how...?

i approach her and examine her more closely, coming to her fromt side...'it can't be,' i think to myself...a fallen angel...

amazed i stand frozen gazing at her face. suddenly she starts walking and passes through my form...ahhh i gasp in a mix of pleasure and pain as her perfect soul passes through me. i shall post a demon to watch this one...

i return to hell and come to sit upon my throne..."mephisto!" mephisto approaches slowly from the shadows to my right, the cuts and scars laced across his face and body are proof of my constant beatings upon him. he flinches as i raise my hand toward him.

"mephistopholes!" he shrinks at my voice. "i want you to follow this girl...she interests me..." as i open a tear in the air and open it for him to see the girl in question....

"as you wish my lord....." as he disappears through the portal in the air.
 
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Raphaela

OOC: I'd like to take a stab at this one. Familiar with Wim Wenders' Far Away, So Close!. My angel will be amazingly similiar to Nastassja Kinski's Raphaela in that movie.
 
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well, welcome aboard honey_b, i have no idea what character that is, but i'm guessing you're much more well read than myself. i'm more of a scifi fantasy type of guy (not the nerdy type mind you, just got bored with normal fiction when i was a kid). come up with a name and make sure she's innocent is all i request. she is not a sexual creature.....yet...heheheheheheehehheh, let the corruption begin. but i still need a mephisto as well. feel free to post once or twice before we have a mephisto, but i am supposed to be making sure my reign in hell will not be challenged again (meaning i'll be giving satan his beating for the day while you go about with your perfect little soul...)

also, people, do not be afraid that mephisto is a little bitch or minor character...i plan on making hom a ver very major player. i need someone who wants to give it a shot and have fun being a demon of hell.
 
How's this?

Raphaela is an angel. Her dark hair and eyes remind one of a Renaissance painting. She looks upon the world with infinite tenderness, absorbed in the suffering and joy of the human race. Mortals do not see her as she walks amoung them. She does not feel their emotions, but it is she or another like her, who ease the pain of people in need. She hears music in the sunrise and sees poetry in flowers. Raphaela is innocent of all that is corrupt and debased in this world and beyond.
 
OOC:...Well tmuyo since you sent me an avatar the least I can do is try Mephisto.
I have yet to play a little bitch here and have often been content to be a minor character.
However my role model will be Boris Cristoff in the Opera Mephistopheles...maybe I can find a picture somewhere.

Now Honey B, it's not like we havn't met a time or two so if for any reason you or Tmuyo would rather have another devil do your dirty work, just let me know.

I can always play solitaire and drink another martini.
 
it's an honor to be working with the two of you.

i am thouroughly enjoying the kindness and willingness to join into a newbies stories.

honey_b: sounds like you know exactly the type of innocent soul i was going for...thanx. sounds great.

ariosto: like i said, mephisto shall become a very major character and i'll email you why. also, about ur martini avatar, i can send it to you if you like. i'll leave my email address in my message to you. if you are wary of virus' have no fear, i admire the damn things but i'm the last to pass one. if you want to set up a onetime email account (unless i can send you the avatar through aim, icq, yahoo messenger or even through literotica[that last one i don't know if we can]), i will be glad to send you the perfect avatar for the martini drinking, thread spinning, vegetable master of the ooc club. lol, sorry, found ur veggie disaster my first day here, i was surprised but your well writteness almost convinced me to try the other side and play a female role as a learning experience. but alas, you had the thread closed....

mephisto or angel, you guys pick who goes first or shall it be ladies first since ariosto is a gentleman?
 
Ooops

Oops, missed Ariosto's post somehow, so many apologies and nevermind :) Sorry Ari!
 
Raphaela

If you could see her, she would be crouched over a small child who is crying. Raphaela raises a hand to wipe away the tears even though she knows she can not. Her eyes are the soft limpid brown of a young doe and they look from the child's tear-stained face to the fallen icecream with understanding compassion. As if sensing something the child quiets, before his harassed mother drags him away from the spoiled treat.

Raphaela rises. She has sensed something cold, something not right on this busy street. Concern pricks her senses as enter the park across the steet.
 
grrrr....second time to post this thing....why didn't it work the first time?

lucifer

hmmm....while mephisto is away i will go and hunt down that bastard satan. i choose what weapon i will use today, hmm a nasty looking 2 headed spear. i jump to my chariot and whip the rains for my skeletal thouroughbreds to take off.

flying through the air above hell i watch as my mions do what they do everyday, torturing the human souls and the lessor demons. i see a demon running toward the wastelands..."that must be my prey now!"

"SATAN!!!! i will take special enjoyment in this days hunt. this is the anniversary of the day you dethroned me."

i whip the horses to go faster and faster...inding through the trees to the wastelands. i run him down with my chariot and come back for a second pass. i purposely run the chariots wheels across his legs hearing them snap and brake under the chariots weight. he cries out in pain.

i move my chariot a ways down and notice that satan is still trying to escape my wrath. i slowly walk, letting him hear every footstep as i get closer and closer to him. "i should thank you for dethroning me. now i can be much more sadistic and evil. and for that, i'll give you a shorter death."

i stab him through the back of his neck and hear a muffled scream. there is a fairly large large pool of blood appearing at the water fall pouring from his throat.

"well, i lied. i p[lan to make you suffer anyway. i withdraw the spear until the head is is in his throat. i give it a good twist for measure and hear air clumsily escape his throat. i yank the spear out and take pleasure in the sound of his not completely limp body hit the ground. i plant one end of the long spear into the ground.

"i'm not done with you yet satan." i say as i reach forward and grab satans head by hooking my fingers into his eyes sockets noticing him squirm at the pain as i pierce the sacs that allow him to see. "not quite finished at least."

i toss him so that his back makes contact with the spear head raised to the sky. more pleasure as satans squirming body slowly slides down the spear. he's going into convulsions, spurting blood and vomit down his own face.

i call for cerebus and the rest of the hell hounds to finish him of while there is still life in his body. "goodbye for today satan. i'll see you tomorrow." as i walk back to my throne wondering how the angel is doing.

i get excited thinking of what mephisto's report will be like.
 
Signing on as the "New" Mephisto

Whats this I see? A beautiful angel crossing the street? My how lovly a sight. Must corruped this pure soul. She shouldn't put forth much resisstance. Earth-bound angels rarely do. After all, isn't this hell on earth?

I make my way towards her and I sesnse she feels my presents. My she makes me almost want to change sides... Wait! I must not forget who I am. She will be the one violated, not I. Evil must always overcome good. I will bring out the devil in her, he he he he....
 
yo mephisto this is lucifer

remember, mephisto was ordered not to touch the angel. only to observe and report back to lucifer, or he'll get more than his usual beating.

if you have questions as to wheyou should take ur character then please email me. right now ur going in the wrong direction and that's bad.
 
Mephisto

OOC:Sorry, me lord, I'll just go back to hell and read a hockey magazine or something! Call when you need assistance.
 
lucifer

ooc: *groans*, i just meant that i had dispatched mephisto with an order to watch her and report back...that's all...info gathering not let's go rape lucifers interest. i'm not like assholisto, i'm not gonna keep you away from any fun. just that satan becomes enthralled with girl and you can have the demon women you want, but i'll email you about something that would alter the story greatly.
 
Mephisto

"Ready for the report on this angel Raphaella, me lord? She is as pure and wholesome as they come", I pause.

"I observed her out on the streets today, as instructed, and you won't believe what went on." At this point, I look to see the bastard's reaction. He tries to appear mildly interested, but I can tell he's intrigued.

He impatiantly motions for me to continue. "She approached a young sobbing child and seemed to fell the nipper's pain. If I didn't know any better, I'd say she was crying." The revelation of this last point sounded rather ignorant, being that neither angels nor demons feel emotions that way.

Lucifer adjusts his possition on his throne. "Go on", he thunders. "I think she sensed my precense, because every few moments her eyes glanced around", I finished.
 
lucifer

i was disastisfied with mephisto's meager reconaissance, but what little he told me was excellent...

"why do you seem shocked that she cried mephisto? do you not know what a fallen angel is capable of? anything a human can, except that a fallen angel will slowly forget and become human. they might still keep some behaviors but they will become human. but so much sin will not exist on her soul as most humans. she will keep her soul fairly pure of evil."

"i hunger for a pure soul......" i turn and look to a new portal, watching this raphaela.

"keep watching her mephistopholes."
 
Raphaela

Raphaela walked across the soft grass. She watched a pair of young lovers as they strolled by a fountain. A smiled played across her lips as the man gave the woman a coin and she threw it into the fountain. Raphaela wished she had the power to make their wish come true, all of their wishes. The couple walked on and got lost in a crowd. Raphaela walked over to the fountain and sat down on its edge. Looking up, she lost herself in the light playing on the dancing water. She kicked off her shoes and swung her legs over the side. The cold water splashed dampening her skirt. She pulled up the long, flowing material to her knees.
 
OOC: Sorry, I have to bow out of this thread. Hope you find another suitable angel.
 
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why the quick exit honey b? well, i can't blame you i guess. i'm sure your reason is justified...i hope. well i guess this thread is now dead.
 
ask honey b first just in case.

just pm her and ask if it's ok. i don't want to incringe on her character w/o checking first.
 
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