The Public Cuckold

[das_risiko]

I would love to see someone write the following story:

A dominant woman takes her husband to the park after dark for his weekly BDSM session. She strips him and then secures his hands to one of those straight line jungle gyms that you swing hand over hand to get from one end to the other (sorry - don't know the proper name). The wife should also be nude in this scene.

After a short duration, a car pulls into the parking lot of of the park. The man becomes scared that someone will see him in this predicament, but his wife doesn't seem to mind. She even comments that it might make things interesting. But then things turn bad when the car's driver walks up and turns out to be a policeman.

In an effort to avoid arrest for public indecency, the wife offers to let the officer help her "train" her slave husband.

Some potential ideas that could be included:

Use of billy club on the husband's erect cock
Use of billy club as a dildo in wife's pussy and / or husband's ass
Husband forced to suck the officer's cock so the officer can fuck the wife
Husband forced to clean wife's pussy and officer's cock after the fuck

I would be willing to help with ideas, but I don't have nearly the talent for actually writing this story.

Thanks.

 

[wehstar]

Now I think that's a fairly interesting and unique idea. I've half a thought of trying my hand at a little writing again when I'm off for a couple of weeks soon and think I might use this as a little inspiration if you don't mind. I could credit you with the idea, it gives me something to work off.

I've worked to request before but wouldn't want to promise I'll do it. Though to be honest I don't think I'd do it the way you would like as I'd deviate from your script somewhat.

 

[silverwhisper]

a few more ideas:

1. remembering that most police cars have video surveillance cameras, possessing video evidence of the husband's public humiliation might also add something to the story.

2. cops have handcuffs.

3. what if the cop has someone already in the back of his car, maybe a drunk & disorderly biker who's starting to sober up just enough? maybe it's someone the cop throws into the drunk tank often. then, force the husband to watch the cop and the biker double-team his wife. and of course, he has to eat the creampies they leave.

4. maybe the wife is wearing a strap-on as well, something new she was intending to try out before the encounter with the police car?

given the cuckold angle, unfavorable comparisons between the cop's night stick and the husband's cock seem inevitable.

ed

 

[DormantEvil]

Monkey bars?

 

[wehstar]

You gotta love monkeys haven't ya. I'm not sure there's a place for onlooking chimps in this scene though

 

[das_risiko]

Now I think that's a fairly interesting and unique idea. I've half a thought of trying my hand at a little writing again when I'm off for a couple of weeks soon and think I might use this as a little inspiration if you don't mind. I could credit you with the idea, it gives me something to work off.

I've worked to request before but wouldn't want to promise I'll do it. Though to be honest I don't think I'd do it the way you would like as I'd deviate from your script somewhat.

Would love it if you would take up the challenge. As far as deviating from the script, I was simply offering an idea. I loved the other post about the video camera in the police car. Maybe that can be incorporated. Another idea would be for the husband to become a true public cuckold by making this a serial story with continued sessions at the public park.

In either case, if you decide to write the story, it will be your story so you can write what you like. Just let me know if you write it or not.

 

[Carnevil9]

Monkey bars?

Well sure. Where else do you expect horny monkeys to hook up?

 

[das_risiko]

I am guessing no one ever took up this story idea. I am getting ready to post another idea. Maybe I someone will be interested in it.

 

[subwannabe]

I personally didn't like the idea but different flavors for different folks. It just didn't sound realistic to me and I like realism. I would tweek the idea to one of these three things:

1. The car pulling up was actually a prearranged event

2. The car pulling up was actually a policewoman

3. A husband had tied his wife up and the car pulling up was a policeman

 

[nakdsub]

Okay, how about this

The wife and the cop have been doing it behind hubby's back for awhile now. Since she can't get out of the house at night they wonder what the hubby would do if the cop came over and screwed her with the husband home so they set up this scenario. She tieds up the hubby like it's a game then the cop comes and screws her in front of the hubby to see what his reaction will be.

 

[das_risiko]

I personally didn't like the idea but different flavors for different folks. It just didn't sound realistic to me and I like realism. I would tweek the idea to one of these three things:

1. The car pulling up was actually a prearranged event

2. The car pulling up was actually a policewoman

3. A husband had tied his wife up and the car pulling up was a policeman

The car pulling up could be pre-arranged. If the cop is a policewoman, is the wife bi? I am not sure I like the last scenario. Men cheating on women is so everyday. While I know it happens, women cheating on men seems to be a bit more taboo? Also, I have never heard of a women being referred to as a cuckold, so I am not sure that would work.

 

[das_risiko]

The wife and the cop have been doing it behind hubby's back for awhile now. Since she can't get out of the house at night they wonder what the hubby would do if the cop came over and screwed her with the husband home so they set up this scenario. She tieds up the hubby like it's a game then the cop comes and screws her in front of the hubby to see what his reaction will be.

Maybe they have been doing it for a while, but I don't like the idea of doing it behind his back. If they've been doing it for a while it's been in front of him the whole time. To me, and others will disagree, cuckolding isn't suppose to be a marriage wrecker, its suppose to be an act of humiliation performed by a loving, but dominant wife. It is only humiliating if he knows about it and is forced to watch.

 

[nakdsub]

Don't mind me

Yeah, admittedly this is not my cup of tea. The thought of a, "loving" wife humiliating her husband by fucking another guy in front of him is completely foreign to me. I'll back out of this one.

 

[RicoLouis]

Well sure. Where else do you expect horny monkeys to hook up?

in the barrel.

 

[geronimo_appleby]

Yeah, admittedly this is not my cup of tea. The thought of a, "loving" wife humiliating her husband by fucking another guy in front of him is completely foreign to me. I'll back out of this one.

it would end up in the Loving Wives category. whoever wrote it would have to have a thick skin to take the inevitable torrent of abuse that the piece would probably engender.

 

[nakdsub]

That I do know about

it would end up in the Loving Wives category. whoever wrote it would have to have a thick skin to take the inevitable torrent of abuse that the piece would probably engender.

Yup, that I DO know about.