The Proposal

Rattlesnake1775

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Okay, so this is a bit uncomfortable, as it is way to close to tooting my own horn then I am comfortable with, but here goes anyways...

I am very thankful for all the feedback on the first chapter of the story "The Proposal." The story is complete, and all pieces have been submitted to literotica. Once they are approved, they will be posted on the site for your viewing/reading pleasure.

I also realize that I made several grammatical errors, as I tend to. I am in the process of looking for an editor. However, I wrote the story, along with the others I am currently posting, while deployed to Iraq where editors where in short supply, and I want to get them out now to clear the backlog of stories I have written and am writing in my head. Anybody know a good editor, let me know!

Thank you for all the feedback. :catroar:
 
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