The Pit

[FazilKotuk]

I had this weird vision/image in my head just now of a man descending or being tossed into a pit full of naked and horny women. Which makes me wonder why and how he would end up there....as a punishment....some punishment, lol....unless he was gay? Just a thought.

 

[piltdownman]

It conjures an interesting image... but they'd kill him, wouldn't they? Just screw him to death....

 

[Shendude]

It conjures an interesting image... but they'd kill him, wouldn't they? Just screw him to death....

Aye.

Like that guy from the end of The Meaning of Life.

 

[FazilKotuk]

It conjures an interesting image... but they'd kill him, wouldn't they? Just screw him to death....

Possibly....and perhaps that is the punishment. Or maybe he lands in an afterlife Limbo, in one of those religions that doesn't give women an automatic in the usual places. Where would those women go? A Limbo of sorts, that could make sense....and then he somehow ends up there....and it becomes Heaven for him....without the restrictions or limits of a mortal body...assuming, of course, that any of them had any bodies to replace the mortal ones.....that's the big problem with the afterlife, you know...they assume in religions that the soul can feel sensations like pain and pleasure.

 

[xssve]

Very Dionysian.


Pick me!

 

[reignophelia]

.....

 

[piltdownman]

I could see buxom female bodies writhing, flames flickering on naked skin, dancing shadows, breasts and thighs, a sense of desperation and desire... and moaning, a lot of moaning... but how to make a story of it I wouldn't have the first idea... unless you could just drop straight into that scenario without too many deep explanations to bog it all down...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I thought of poor "Daniel in the Lion's Den" from the Bible. lol...

(Too much religion writing with the starter of this thread.)

 

[FazilKotuk]

I thought of poor "Daniel in the Lion's Den" from the Bible. lol...

(Too much religion writing with the starter of this thread.)

You mean that we are writing too much connected to religion, or something else?

 

[FazilKotuk]

Very Dionysian.


Pick me!

LOL....I know sounds very punishing, doesn't it?

Even if it did kill me....it wouldn't be such a bad way to go...but, of course, it couldn't kill the character if it's on Lit....because that would be snuff.....

....but if they are all already dead.....hmmmm.....eternity of pleasure, and no lack of stamina.....

 

[FazilKotuk]

I could see buxom female bodies writhing, flames flickering on naked skin, dancing shadows, breasts and thighs, a sense of desperation and desire... and moaning, a lot of moaning... but how to make a story of it I wouldn't have the first idea... unless you could just drop straight into that scenario without too many deep explanations to bog it all down...

There's a thought....scene first to grab the reader, and then explain it!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

You mean that we are writing too much connected to religion, or something else?

*chuckles* When I come to Lit and the first thing I think of when I read about a pit of naked women is a childhood Bible story... that has to point to something perverse about me.

 

[FazilKotuk]

*chuckles* When I come to Lit and the first thing I think of when I read about a pit of naked women is a childhood Bible story... that has to point to something perverse about me.

There's something perverse about all of us smut writers, dear....it's that extra leap of imagination that has to twist the usual scenarios that marks us....that deliciously twisted nature....at least with the good ones, that is...

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

There's something perverse about all of us smut writers, dear....it's that extra leap of imagination that has to twist the usual scenarios that marks us....that deliciously twisted nature....at least with the good ones, that is...

I believe I have a delicious twisted nature.

 

[FazilKotuk]

I believe I have a delicious twisted nature.

Yes, indeed, you do, my dear...